All Comments on 'I am His 'good girl''

Mater as you call him in your story and I know it is a story, but he should never use your ass and then your cunt and I believe he did once. It is a recipe for infection in the cunt. Going from the cunt to the ass is okay but not the other way. If he can use his voice to get your body to relax that is fantastic and it is a punishment many would get, but not with the consideration he gave to have you open for him. Good story.

I very much hated this. It was boring, too much detail, not enough substance. And that someone would spit in the face of someone else is disgusting. Yes it is a story but a true master teaches through example, not through pain and humiliation. It gives all masters a bad name and reputation. I won't make the same mistake twice of reading any more of your stories.

Beautiful

You use too many commas, you allow your characters thoughts to ramble and your paragraphs are 2 sentences long. The story is nice. However, you should research format and punctuation use. Sum things up tidally - Instead of "none the less" use "regardless". Put more in each paragraph, leaving breaks only where there is a conclusion. All of this kept taking me out of the story. It was distracting.