- BDSM
- I am His 'good girl'
- Page 2
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Master moved me to the bed, he laid on his back and instructed me to climb on top. when I placed my pussy on his cock Master slapped me hard across my ass and placed his hand around my throat and squeezed tighter than he ever had.
He said: "I said you're getting fucked in the ass today, did I not make myself clear?"
"Yes Master, I'm sorry..."
Master slapped my ass again and squeezed my airway tighter...
"Don't be sorry, just do better, now open up and sit that pretty little asshole on my cock... you're doing this for me, the pleasure belongs to me. "
I did as directed without hesitation. I was Master's to have as he saw fit and my duty was to ensure his satisfaction and pleasure with me at all times. I wanted to earn back his respect and once again be known as his 'good girl'. After all I have always despised the word whore and slut. However, when he uses those names for me, I become wet.
When Master finished inside me he called me his 'good girl'. Marking a new territory on my body he claimed for his own. I went without orgasm that day, but pleasing him was a greater satisfaction than any release from orgasm would ever be. I am his 'good girl'.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoYou use too many commas, you allow your characters thoughts to ramble and your paragraphs are 2 sentences long. The story is nice. However, you should research format and punctuation use. Sum things up tidally - Instead of "none the less" use "regardless". Put more in each paragraph, leaving breaks only where there is a conclusion. All of this kept taking me out of the story. It was distracting.
Bobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years agoI very much hated this. It was boring, too much detail, not enough substance. And that someone would spit in the face of someone else is disgusting. Yes it is a story but a true master teaches through example, not through pain and humiliation. It gives all masters a bad name and reputation. I won't make the same mistake twice of reading any more of your stories.
gentleone58about 7 years agoMater as you call him in your story and I know it is a story, but he should never use your ass and then your cunt and I believe he did once. It is a recipe for infection in the cunt. Going from the cunt to the ass is okay but not the other way. If he can use his voice to get your body to relax that is fantastic and it is a punishment many would get, but not with the consideration he gave to have you open for him. Good story.
