All Comments on 'I Am Me!'

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MitchFraellMitchFraellover 9 years ago
Excellent

Will she ever understand what she really wants or what she ought to want? I could many married people have this doubt and need to overcome it to be happy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
ethereal , sublime & exquisite.

story packs a hard punch .

vivid storytelling

most remarkable .

MinatoMinatoover 9 years ago
Mistirious

Love the build up of the story, though I still can't figure out if she was dreaming that or not.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 9 years ago
Original

Great story, I love the inner torment and then the reflection taking over, brilliant.

MusicGuy4FunMusicGuy4Funover 4 years ago
One Hell of a romantic metaphor

That was enjoyable.

I take it as a dramatization of the selfish vs humanist dichotomy we all face: to go for material and/or social gain vs going for real love. As such, the story really resonated.

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