All Comments on 'I Am Playing Tonight With My Dom'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Nice scene and you have me curious as to why, also.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
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The title almost made me skim straight past! Sounded very amateur compared to the story written. "I am playing tonight with my Dom"? What? Is 'tonight' a name of a song you are playing with your Dom? No. The correct title would be "I am playing with my Dom tonight".

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