All Comments on 'I Am Selfish. And She Loves It.'

Yes. I really love this. There is nothing a woman loves more than to be so deeply wanted by her man. To be loved and not shared or allowed a side person in an emotional situation. Belonging to only one is truly how it should be, but it works both ways. He should feel the same from her as she gets from him.

"She knows that this means." Hint: That's not a sentence. Bonus hint: It doesn't mean what you probably intended, either. You also seemed confused about when to use 'here' and 'there' in reference to a place where you're not currently occupying. This is also not a sentence: "I still do not know who but she is." Then we learn you don't know how to write dialogue, either. ["Still standing in the middle of the room, I take down my khaki grey pants and underwear.] Note, that quotation mark is totally misplaced. One minute she always has soup on the stove, the next she's making hamburgers. Lesson to be learned? A story this short has no excuse for such sloppy editing.