All Comments on 'I Become the First Dickless Deke'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hilarious

This was a first-class tale. Honestly I wouldn't be surprised if it was true.

EllenMelvilleEllenMelvilleover 6 years agoAuthor
If it weren't for Anonymous...

I would have nothing to which to look forward. Amazing how one sharp commentator who takes time to write can make such a difference. Till next time. Hope everyone had a happyThanksgiving.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

A return to the irreverent style of First Skinny Dip Becomes Afloat Suck! that I liked so much. It’s like reading someone’s diary, but without the stop-start dictated by that format. And then there are the numerous, but never repetitive, humorous comments seamlessly inserted into the narrative, each unerringly targeting a character’s flaws.

I’m not sure I would agree with the previous Anonymous’s (possibly tongue in cheek) comment that it could be true. To me it is more a case of wishing that it was true and imagining myself as the chief protagonist.

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