All Comments on 'I Can See You'

by nakedwonder50

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Your submission

The very best that I have ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent!

That was great! Good story, told well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great

Well told. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good

it was good u need to make a second part though

SusanJillParkerSusanJillParkerover 10 years ago
Nice work

Nice work, very erotic. Good job. You need to write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nice turn at the end.

That leaves it wide open you a second edition. Love the concept.

winecountryanniewinecountryanniealmost 4 years ago
Very Enjoyable!

This was a very fun story... and I loved the little surprise twist at the end!

As an addicted exhibitionist, I particularly liked how “Eve” talked about her addiction... a sweet truth in the telling. And... the way the story ends, many follow-up scenarios come to mind.

Thanks... too bad it appears that this is your only story... I enjoyed your style.

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