by ConsensualKink
I thought it would be much rougher than it was. For two men it was very gentle. I expected for her to be punished after the naughty messages but she was not. Disappointing.
Thank you all so much for your feedback and comments. I'm a very VERY appreciative author. Any of you who have sent me private feedback have gotten responses but I wanted to thank each of you who commented, from a place of deepest sincerity THANK YOU GUYS.
Is there anything any of you would like to see or read more about? To the anonymous user who asked for a rougher MFM, I am currently working on a MFMF piece featuring use of traditional Japanese weaponry and the idea of complete trust in the people you are with. I think when its done you might be interested in reading it.
Again, thank you all for your comments and encouragement.
You killed it. I came without touching myself! I'd love to see a rougher MFM outta you.
This was excellent. I hope you write more, cause this was exactly the kind of thing I love.
Wow, I really liked this - congrats on a fab first effort......
Exceedingly well done. Very polished. Great description. Reality factor was at the top of the charts. Looking forward to future writes.
A very erotic episode very well described. A 5 Star beginning to what one hopes will be just the first of many stories to come.