All Comments on 'I Can't Get Wet or I'll Get Fucked'

This is short you should make more, in different situations maybe

This is excellently written. I appreciate how you didn't waste time getting into the story as so many other writers do. The idea is also fresh and interesting. Now that's we've gotten the preamble out of the way I'd like to hear more of the backstory and lore. How did this happen? How will she respond to this? I will also add the criticism to write more of your character's inner experience so that we can relate more to her. Is she horrified? Disgusted? You humiliate her a lot so maybe focus on that? Looking forward to more.