All Comments on 'I Dare You Pt. 11'

Love these characters...l

Excellent writing. You created characters that are not only believable, but had consistent personality traits. The big points are that they felt like real people; and it felt like they really came to life. Most people I’ve encountered who struggle with sexuality, find their way to their own gender; in this case, Mads found that she knew her basic tendency, but learned that love is with a person — not a gender. That was a truly nice aspect of the story.

Fantastic. If this’s the end, ok, but I’d love another 11 chapters

This was really enjoyable to read. Mads figuring out what she really wants and being unsure and then having Regina point it out was great. I can see York getting really pissed when he found out Heather had an abortion with his child was oh so believable. She obviously didn’t know him at all. I will have to read the rest of your stories now that I read this and enjoyed it tremendously.

Really good story. Need some more like this Hermano.

Just a fantastic story. Thanks!

Thoroughly enjoyed the story, but it would have been even better had it been without so many typos and grammatical and spelling errors. 5 just the same.

What a fantastic series. Thank you for presenting believable, at least in a fantasy way, characters and a wonderful story arc.

I really enjoyed the story. Thank you and continue writing.

5 stars for this ending

Absolutely fantastic series, once I started I couldn't stop.

Thans! Sweet, but why all those short ass chapters for essentially ONE really nice story? How many 5's do you need? :-)