All Comments on 'I Feel Pretty!'

by Pervie_Priestess69

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
What language is this story written in?

I never thought I would take sides with Conservatives on anything, but maybe they have a point here; perhaps we need to declaire English as our official language - not than anyone remembers how to use it.

JIMLODGESJIMLODGESabout 14 years ago
Names

Why are you characters named after characters in the bleach manga?

Pervie_Priestess69Pervie_Priestess69almost 14 years agoAuthor

Well, Anonymous I understand that everyone's simply not going to like it but constructive criticism could have helped me better in the instance. But I appreciate your honesty, and for that thanx!

Well, JIMLODGES that could be because it's a fan fiction which I thought I had made clear unless they were removed. I appreciate that you recognized it as Bleach though!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
A most excellent piece of authorship

I would like to say that this story is the most intelligently written piece of

erotica that I've have yet to encounter (and I have encountered a lot I must admit). Just wonderful ! Appeals to the more intelligent group or

class of erotica fans...not merely the salacious. Todd Chapin

April, 2011

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