All Comments on 'I Followed You There...'

Confusing.

Super hot story, nice control scenario.

What a load of crap!

I would only download and print this to use as toilet paper.

Go back to your needlepoint.

Why is a BDSM story in Loving Wives?

From past tense to present tense - is this a script, or just writing it as you make it up? Bad plot, lousy technique.

One can only assume that such garbage has to have been written by a sick mind. Do Literotica a favor and just go away.

tell you what a piece of crap this story is. I hope you learn how to write a story soon. There was a lot of unneeded filler in this story. Please put it in the correct category next time.

Just a trashy story about two people that need killing very slowly and very painfully. Edge weapons and electricity work quite well.

The slapping, tying, discussion of punishment, and master stuff all suggest BDSM. Loving Wives is the wrong category for this story.

go away you sick fuck.

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Poor writing, dull story, wrong catagory, ho hum...anon jerry

Is that the story is posted under the wrong genre.

If one is into the master and slave type of story, which I'm not so much into that type of story, this would be a good one.

It was just a surprise to see the story in this category of loving wives.

Still not too bad of a read when I finally understood the storyline, thanks.

Yuck

If it ain't incest it's good for me...

Pretty poor story line.

and interesting. It took a few unexpected turns and bumps that I enjoyed and at least one that disturbed me. Thanks.

Actualy it sucked big time!

Would have been someone turning on the gas oven, letting it fill the house a bit, and then striking a match.

Yes, that would have been a much better ending to this tale of human detritus.

and see where it goes. TK U MLJ LV NV

Lousy tale in the wrong category.

that i s rape simple or they are morons

If you want to fuck around like you were single? Doens't make sense to me. How can you say you love a woman and then push her to be degraded in dangerous sexual relationships?

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Well that was a waste of time wasn't it??

Too funny and stupid for words. This writer is nothing but a pathetic cuck trying to sell his awful and sad lifestyle. Your wife being a whore is ridiculous. If you get off on this you are one twisted and disturbed individual. You aren’t anything more than someone to be laughed and humiliated. Oh wait you like that too, Too funny

lots of controversy goes with consequences whiche. sure to follow, TK U MLJ LV NV

Nothing but predators both

An interesting thought. "Bastard boy" aka mc, returns to the same bar the following week. After a bit, the girl approaches him They engage in conversation, he is beginning to enjoy the evening, assuming he ay have a repeat, or even a better night on the horizon. They become more and more evolved with one another.

Unknown to 'bastard boy", she had been slowly spiking his drinks for hours. His will and any thought to him, any thought of denying her any instructions, gone.

They depart, each taking their own vehicle, thus permitting "Bb" , to assume he was in charge of the evening and night to come.

They had been making out for about 15 mins. when "Bb" began yawning. in 5 mins, he was out like a light.

The previous week's victim initiated pack back, retribution, humiliation and a few other actions that be assured to gain "Bb" attention and generate a pause sufficient to think, "Do I want a repeat of tonight again?

She had friends who were involved the the BDSM lifestyle and upon hearing her description of the previous ordeals, they created an interdiction for her "guest." It required i excess of an hour to have everything erected and places around the apartment, covered to prevent identification in the rearranged rooms. Phtos, videos, recordings, "Bb" wearing a very pale pink ballerina costume complete with cut out for a cock cage containing his miniaturized equipment due to some experimental medication obtained by some who worked in a medical research lab and a larger opening in the posterior opening.

Once all of the incriminating evidence had been accumulated, "Bb" was placed in his vehicle. all clothing removed. the cock cage reattached, with very obvious size sticker which read: EXTREMELY SMALL.

The vehicle was placed in the first row, next to the walk leading to the main entrance, Do you think that Bastard boy" would feel the retribution, revenge and humiliation he attempted to dump o his victim?

Is this properly directed or should it go elsewhere?

I hate rape stories.