All Comments on 'I Fought The Law...'

Hi CK,

Wonderful Love Story

I enjoyed reading your story, especially the ending intrigue of Brian being Detective Chris's Dad and planning the entire Caper, to bring Chris n Terry together.

Now that's surely an Arranged Marriage!!

When they were talking, her chest clenched. But earlier, when in each others arms, they were in a clinch, not a clench. There were a couple other little edit things that could have been fixed, but the clinch/clench difference was the one that really caught my eye. It was a good story though, and I appreciated the hard work that obviously went into it!

Great story!

There is an old saying about even the smartest criminal will eventually make a mistake and get caught. It seems it was Terry's turn. While Fate has a nasty way of turning things around, Terry got away, but only not really, She was 'caught' by the very woman investigating her. I really liked this story, and wasn't surprised to see Christy knew who did it. Christy's real dad as matchmaker was a nice twist. So everybody lives happily ever after, which in a way love stories should end.

Great, romantic with a really nice twist story. I was really happy to be treated this morning with a story from you. It was definitely up on par with all your others. Thank you for writing and sharing.

As a near hopeless romantic how could I not love this piece. The characters richly drawn, the crime details perfect, the bit of a connection with Virginiaverse a nice touch and the sex sensually erotic. Maybe you’ll share more of Terry and Chris; they really do make an intriguing couple.

A most enjoyable story and a fitting tribute to Brian,

Very good story but…can’t help but feel that Chris deserves better than Terry. Terry was willing to let the “love of her life” risk her career by not admitting to her what she’d done. But Chris would’ve done the right thing and arrested her if her own father hadn’t screwed her on that, (helluva way to matchmake Dad). Terrys reasons for becoming a criminal also suggest she’s a pint low in the morals department. Well, they say love is blind. Just hope Terry doesn’t get the itch again someday and burn Chris for real. Let’s be honest. She quit crime cause she had the money to do so and realized she’d nearly blown it. But if she finds an opportunity that’s too good to be true? Hmmm.. Still, I enjoyed the overall story. Well written! Always makes me sad to see Bonnie alive again. Nice to know Terry was smart enough not to go there!

Fabulous! :)

Awww great to see Bonnie again

Wonderful story, I loved every moment of this one. 5-stars.

What a great story. The matchmaker twist was brilliant.

My goodness, the "I stole your heart" line was so corny.

Loved the rest though :P

I REALY LIKED THIS i sortor hope for a part 2 the detail was good the story was better thanks hope you are well be happy well and safe a fan shayne

Great to see Bonnie and Victoria pop up again

5*****

Convoluted just as it should be; you have a way with plots and characters. Loved it.

The greatest theft ….. the best of all and this time no evidence left behind …. A great twist and marvelous writing and done ….. extraordinary tale thank you for sharing

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Great story with a happy ending. Thank you for that.

Wonderful, love is where and with WHOM you find it

Good story from a very good author; a little too much "lip crashing", but what do I know?