by Dark_Brother
Your stories are erotic and interesting, the problem with them is that John seems to be more and more of an ass. First he blames Geo for being so stubborn when he was the root of the problem, then he takes his harem for granted and keeps cheating on them. I for one like his "conquests" but at least make it such that his girls know about and like this behaviour and maybe even add those girls to his harem. Betty and Angel are both great possibilities and both are evinced interest in him romantically.
In agreement with first comment, John is an ass. He constantly has sleeps around the women he supposedly "loves," using the author's own words here. Along with that, Amber just had a child. He's flat out cheating on the mother of his child. So much for he "loves" them.
Love the stories and this series. I check back daily to see if there are any updates. I could read these all day long. Keep in coming as they keep me coming.
hmm i would like for geo and john to find a solution and considering the linked stories i hope that you are continuing broken bliss.
I felt bad for John when his women were shunning him and half ass justified his steppin out of bounds. He is startin to piss me off. Love the story though!
SH
The pokemon comment right after hearing stripper court made my day. I even stopped to write this mid way. Nice work
If enney one haets John read subjects0 it explanes whats hapining.
YOU HAVEN'T GOT A CLUE WHAT TO WRITE AND GIVE US THIS CRAP. SENSUAL NO. EROTIC, NO. LEARN HOW TO WRITE, IT'S BOORING AND PAINFUL TO READ.
@anon before me - dude, if it is so 'BOORING' and painful to read, why the fuck are you reading every chapter then?
Anyways, apart from the usual typos the chapter was good enough, though, quite useless(maybe unnecessary is a better word here) plotwise.
I agree with the one below you have a great series and I love how just about all your stories are interconnected
The complaints all of you are writing are not being received, due to the author being deceased. He died in Afghanistan a couple years ago. If you don't believe me, go read The Fallen Heroes by DBs_Bro, it will explain everything.
NW
I look forward to things getting right with Geo, but Betty and Suzy are excellent workers
Our hero does need to treat the women he loves well.