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Anonymousover 8 years agoConfusing
I was really enjoying the story. Until the end... You rushed it. And because of that, the story became detached from emotion. I also noted a lot of grammatical errors in the last stages.
Anonymousover 8 years agoGood first try!
Welcome! Good first story! yes a bit rushed and confusing. But keep writing!
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