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stephenchapmanstephenchapmanabout 7 years ago
Good but not a page turner.

The style reminds me a of the sci-fi from the 60's, 70's. A nice bit of nostalgia. Exposition was nicely balance to create the sense of place without bogging down the story. Glad the computer didn't go all HAL of her. On the other hand there wasn't much conflict or drama. Looking forward to your next story.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...