All Comments on 'I Hate You'

Such a powerful story, with a twist that revealed its self. It’s a dark, yet happy ending. Bravo

Great story! Mom's desire and reasoning are well described and detailed. We can clearly tell the mental conflict she has these two days. Love it!

Lovely,,Thanks I enjoyed it

Come on what happen next, don't make us wait

@Anonymous who doesn't want to make you wait. That's the beauty of suspense! This is a one and done short story. It should be clear what happens next. Use your imagination and take the characters where you want them to go. :-)

If you write a story or book, it is your job to finish it, not ours.

If a story catches our imagination and is well written like this one is, we want YOUR thoughts to embellish the characters you have created.

What an amazing story. Something they both wanted but she didn't realise until he made the first move. This is a story so different to the usual stuff on this site. We'll written. 5 stars.

iWriter4U,

What an interesting twist.

Well, Hate and Love are both 4 letter words. lol!

Very well done. Love her, cheering for him.

On to part 2.

A fun ride so far, 5 Stars.

WB

Just average it was hard to follow maybe the next part will help 3 stars

Good job! I really enjoyed this one.