All Comments on 'I Have a Great Secretary Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Tanaka

Tanaka would be Japanese, not Chinese.

HamsterHamsteralmost 9 years ago
Nope

Gave it a 3 because it wasn't garbage, but I normally stop reading when the woman is described as having 38D boobs. This is as improbable as a 9 inch cock. A woman does not need huge knockers to be the woman you describe. It gets the story off on the wrong foot as far as believability is concerned. And the $200 blowjobs...what a laugh. Sorry, but you need to put this in the sci-fi/fantasy category if you are going to write stuff like that.

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2almost 9 years ago
gave it a 5 because annony is garbage.

thanks for your effort.!!!

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