by sivad44
Gave it a 3 because it wasn't garbage, but I normally stop reading when the woman is described as having 38D boobs. This is as improbable as a 9 inch cock. A woman does not need huge knockers to be the woman you describe. It gets the story off on the wrong foot as far as believability is concerned. And the $200 blowjobs...what a laugh. Sorry, but you need to put this in the sci-fi/fantasy category if you are going to write stuff like that.