All Comments on 'I Have a Problem'

Nice. One.

5 stars.

Exceptional. I can see how you garnered 13 or 14 followers per story published, and I will be a follower too.

Arguably this is not a true LW tale as she is not cheating on her new hubby, but your readership will be higher here than in Romance, which is too boring. You gave us enough cheating with the snippets about your family.

Keep 'em coming.

I always enjoy seeing an overly kind protagonist who causes the other characters to learn to be better people through the protagonist's action. Thanks for writing. Randi.

Your writing style sometimes comes across as ticking off a list. It's particularly obvious when you look at a section and realise how many times you use the work "I"

As for getting named as the father on the birth certificate before even marrying her. Jeez.

and this one suckered me right in

It was sweet. I really liked it. The man babies won't but they are never happy anyway.

too much Disney World. Sorry.

Great story, as always!

5

Thank you

Nice to read another story from you

When did Phil get Mary pregnant? She got pregnant after her college graduation and Phil was not around. The last time he saw her was at her high school graduation. So how is Phil the father of his name sake?

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Pasqual

“All’s well that ends well” and I was set to read about the old boyfriend coming back into the picture. The story might have been better in Romance but then I might have missed it and so glad I didn’t.

Thanks for an uplifting read.

Wow... a blast from the past and a terrific one it is.

Sweet. D

So does he do a DNA to make sure he is'nt raising another kid by Asshole?

Um, falsifying DNA results? That's going to come back to bite him. Even if done with the best intentions. He hates cheating, probably hates lying, and some day his son will find out that his dad (and mom) has lied to him his whole life. Other than that, a good story, if a little stilted.

a nice feel-good romantic story.

something we need to read...

after all those cuck stories day after day in LW.

Thanks, DG Hear

Really didn't care for this at all. I can't get my head around how she knows she was drugged and has a confession from the guy that others also raped her while she was passed out and she does NOTHING. no contacting price or nothing. She also names the kid after this guy? Seriously? Then the new man in her life (or old man in her life) rather than going after the scum bag to get him and others arrested or at least charged and get her financial input for child support instead commits a crime and takes on the kid.

ALSO you have a school principal that dates a teacher in his school. So wrong for both of them. She meets this guy and wants to be with him yet she keeps the date?

As hot as she might be she is too stupid to marry.

So glad it turned out happy. And yeah…even the suggestion that one or more of the family might reconcile with their ex’s was a nice little tonic for the soul 😎

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4 **** …… and thanks for continuing to write!

Fine story, but, um, proposing at McDonalds? Really? And she said “yes?” At McDonalds?

Not only did he break the jinx, but he reversed the curse!

Well I liked it and I love that your characters aren't above a little larceny for the greater good.

I don't really get the plague of retarded sluts however.

I also don't understand why his father and brothers were getting back with women that obviously had a cosmic fate to be faithless sluts.

Good to see something from you and hope you're doing well.

ok story...really did not belong in loving wives

Good to see one of the masters is still posting excellent stories.

-LH

Good story and I like happy ending, but have to agree with franceman.

It read more like a user's manual than a story.

It is a good story. My only complaint is that, at times, it felt choppy and forced. Thank you.

Good Story as usual, good authors seem to keep doing that.. but so much sweetness, my blood sugar just spiked! I liked it, but it should have been a Christmas time post,

(My brother) “had a daughter who was the cutest little thing. She was my niece.”

I got a good chuckle out of this - realizing story was narrated by Captain Obvious

Wow so if she does end up cheating some time down the line it's going to sting extra bad.

May we please acknowledge the great Cindy Walker as the writer of You Don't Know Me.

A very good story. I always enjoy the things you write, plus you're an "old timer", been around long enough to read and digest what others have contributed. If you were a "western" you'd be Matt Dillon; good, hardworking, honest, reliable, and always a good guy. Ohio would be Clint Eastwood. HDK would be "Have Gun Will Travel". And JPB; he's John Wayne!

Thanks again. Always a five.

carvohi

Feels like it should be on the Hallmark channel, so little old ladies could enjoy this trite, syrupy tale without a shred of reality to it.

Enjoyed the story. With all that occurred to his family I could see why he was hesitant to marry.

With a family history like that, gun shy is an understandable response. Always look forward to a new DG story.

somewhere east of Omaha

After reading some of the comments either some of you skimmed over reading the story or some of you have a serious reading comprehension problem.

I felt like the MC.. my mom and dad divorced before I was born. He left my 6 month pregnant mom for a slut with 7 children....I haven't seen him since I was 13. I'm 38.. I speak to him on the phone but the relationship we did eventually built is just not there.. as I grew up, I knew I always wanted to be someone's wife and mother. But I was so scared. Looking at my moms relationships, they solidified that people aren't shit and you really shouldn't blindly trust folks. When I met my husband, he went through something similar as a child. His grandfather who was a "God fearing man"(🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🙄🙄🙄) made it his mission to bang all the sluts in the church. He even stole his their rent money to move in with one of the sluts. So yeah, me and him was a bit skittish towards marriage.. everybody around us were disgusting cheating POS. So we talked endlessly about marriage, fidelity and family.. we dated 3 yrs before we moved in together and another 2yrs before we got married. We were in NO RUSH.. we now been together 20 yrs and married for 15 in June with 1 child... I'm saying this to say, I felt this story. You never really know if a marriage is going to last 50 -100 yrs. You're taking a gamble. The way to make sure you come out on top is be with someone who's not only you lover but best friends, someone who shares your same values, someone who actually knows how it feels to get your heart ripped out. The most important is GET TO KNOW THE PERSON. don't rush into anything. It's OK to be skittish. It's OK to be paranoid.. that paranoia will save you a lot of pain and heartche. It helped a lot that me and my hubby literally think the same.. right down to what we should have for dinner. I could literally be thinking Asian and he'll text me "how bout Asian bbq"?.. sometimes it's eerie. It also help that I'm not a nag, my hubby told me sometimes it's like he's married to one of the guys🤣🤣🤣🤣🤭. Except I hate sports. We have gone to strip clubs together(I got a nice lap dance from a nice chick with fake boobs) I felt my first fake breast at a strip club with my husband 😫😫😫🤣🤣🤣🤣.. (I didn't like the boobs.. they were hard as a brick🥴. But she was a nice stripper, could've used a little bit more ass.. but I digress. I have friends who won't even go to a strip club with their man. Shit, I love it.. you have alcohol, gorgeous women naked sliding on poles and music blaring(I love to dance and usually be up dancing taking the attention away from the strippers (my 38 cups are REAL and I have a nice GA peach ass). My friends thinks it makes them gay.. I can assure I absolutely love EVERYTHING about the penis. Right down to the beautiful veins🥴👅🥴.👄. this is just something to do with my man. I'm secure in not only myself but our relationship.. he's not going anywhere honey(unless he sticks his dick somewhere it doesn't belong) had I stayed in my fear that EVERY MAN CHEATS. EVERY MARRIAGE ENDS IN DIVORCE... I never would've found my bestfriend and soul mate. the pain we go through, is meant to make us stronger.. I'm sorry my dad ruined his life. He lost his REAL family for a woman nobody wanted. I know he regrets it. I have a daughter he will never meet (he's in another country and we have no interest going to).. my hubby grandfather actually had the fucking gull to slinker his nasty dirty dick ass back.. when he stole the rent money for his church whore, my hubby and his grandmother were evicted. They came home to people going through their things. That's how they found out he had stolen all of the rent money.. SHE DID NOT TAKE THE FUCKTARD BACK.. ..she also never married again and completely stopped dating. Which saddens me. She's 80 now and just such an awesome lady. She's my mother in law in my eyes. She took care of my husband and made him the man he is. She taught him how to respect women, relationship, marriage, family.. everything I love about that man is because of her. I wouldn't of taken the ass hat back either. So she's a little bit like me also. The cheating douche died alone. The church slut was long gone along with what little money she could take with her. Isn't karma beautiful 😍🤩.. I enjoyed this story because it just brought up so much memories and emotions. It reminded me of my own issues I had due to people around me cheating and ruining their life/family. I remember when my mom told me about my dad. I was mad at her. Cause at the point he actually had a relationship with me for 6yrs, I loved him. When she told me what all he had done. I actually hated his guts and hers. I was mad at her for telling me and tarnishing the daddy I knew for a few years. I hated his guts for treating me and mom not even second or 3rd best.. we were less than. I EVENTUALLY moved in with my mom around 6 (even longer story🤣🤣🤣) I wouldn't see my dad in person again until I was 12. He sporadically called me, never wrote.. ... that's when my mom told me about this woman and her 7 boys. Apparently he wanted boys(that's where my 12yro mind went). I did feel rejected. Those type of things can really fuck with not only your psyche but your self worth.. at 12 I felt worthless. It wasn't until my mom told me the story that I realized I wasn't the worthless one. My cheating prick of a father is. Man he screwed me up. He has no idea just how much what he did to my mom and me fuck'd my mind up. It took a lot of therapy, a good man, a good mom and a lot of faith. Damn, I really liked your story.. this comment wasn't meant to be this daggone long 🤣🤣🤣...I just can't seem to help it.. my apologies for the novel to anyone that actually took the time to read this hot mess.

1 star - real people do not talk like this - the dialog sucks.

Wow. A DG Hear story with less than a 4 star average review! (3.94 as I write).

I helped it up a bit with my 4, but couldn't manage my usual 5.

Sorry.

Keep them coming please, just a little lighter on the cheese.

Good, kindg, but bad also. If the boy needs to know DNA data he will learn of the fraud and may lose out on getting help from his real genetics.

OK, extra sugar on that one.

should have been in Romance

Wonderful story.

Nice romance by the master.

The narrative in the first half of the story didn't flow well. I want to say most of the sentences were on the short side rather than mixing them up and not interrupting a scene by breaking it up too much. I kept waiting for the shoe to fall on Phil, but it never happened and that was very uplifting. Pretty good effort - 4*!

I enjoyed it up until the moment you broke the 4th wall, which made the story about you as the writer and not the character, which made it hard to get back in again.

Thanks

DG Hear, one of the very best to ever post in LW and this story only increases your standing in my eyes. A real feel good story of the type rarely seen in LW anymore. So good, in fact, that I finally find myself in agreement with Odiouser about a story. Just true excellence.

Couldnt keep going when even the sister was the cheater.

It was like a wet dream that validated every single m misogynist. And you know it.

Normally I like your stories and follow you for new ones. Don’t like this one.

He was already gun shy and she kept secrets and lied right from the start. Preview of the same behavior down the road??? I wouldn’t have taken the chance.

Sweet story- 5 stars to writer I love a happy ending

Excellent story as I knew it would be! % BIG FAT BLAZING STARS!

boring

@Pasqual_Clemente,

you need to reread the story, and your question will be answered.

Story for this genre

Very good... just what I expect from this author. *****

I enjoy stories which bring something different, this one certainly did that. Lots of cheating, destroying the protagonist's trust - but none directly involving him or his girl. Excellent. I read it twice, the first time through I was not happy with the lack of explanation around Mary's maybe infidelities - I re-read and decided the lack of more explanation was really preferred. In these stories one waits for the shoe to drop - as written, one wonders if it will. That adds a tension that helps make the happy ending happier. Well done! 5.

For a story titled "I have a problem" there seemed to be no problem....like why bother setting up that everyone in his family was divorced if it geniunely doesn't seem to have any influence. oh no the guy called about a weekend away. 2 sentences later problem solved. phew so tense

I haven’t read this one yet but I’m glad your still writing. I’ve read all of your stories and your my all time favorite. Thanks.

Great story which I enjoyed a lot. I kept thinking that if this was real life, the change to the Phillips birth certificate

could up biting him on the butt later in life. LP

Nicely written and enjoyable.

Other than that...homonyms my friend...homonyms.

You're - contraction of "you are."

Your - possessive form of you.

Nicely written. Very happy to see that you've resumed writing. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Hey DG, thrilled to see another one from you! Thanks for read!

Killian

Nice story! I liked the twist the way it ended for Phil’s family. I was entertained so worked for me!!

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading!

Sorry, -1. I love a lot of your stories, but the drastic RAAC at the end of all involved in the family was a big downer.

Good story.

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

"...powerful sleeping powder..." 😂😂

Facking DNA test can be very dangerous as it leads to false medical history. Don't do it. Even if given the opportunity. Please.

Good fantasy story. Not Going to happened in real life.

Nice story, It was a feel good story that made me happy that I read it. When I see that a story has your name as the writer, I feel confident that it will be a good story and I will enjoy it. 5 stars all the way.

I'm curious as to why the ex-wives of his brothers did what they did? Were they just lying, cheating sluts? I mean it seems they were reconciling there by the end so maybe it was just a moment-of-weakness kind of thing. Still, there was lying and clear planning for their betrayals. I'm surprised anyone could get back with someone that would do that. At least Phil and Mary seem to truly love and each other and will likely have a long and happy marriage. Probably.

Thank you DG, NICE TALE! 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Liked it.

Good story. Liked the romance with MC and Mary. I can understand his one brother (Allen) reconciling with Beth. If anything divorce was harsh for her indiscretion, especially with a child. But do not see how his second brother Charlie got back with Dana. Dana was a full premeditated betrayal. He only caught her before she had sex by being persistent. Beth was dancing lewdly with her ex boyfriend and letting him feel her up at the reunion, but there is no clarity either way if she woukd have slept with her ex boyfriend, if Allen had not shown up. I liked what he did to claim Phil. Was thoughtful.

His father and brothers are morons⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Yikes I can maybe see Allen especially with a kid involved and because he stopped it and it was not premeditated (alcohol + reunion, etc) but his brother Charlie and his father? Lol nope. Those were in cold blood. Not even sure that was Dana's first time. Sue definitely screwed over her first husband though he was a prick also. Only Phil and Mary with Philip were good and rational people. Their romance was cute. The DNA trick was dangerous, and for pity's sake wait til after she agrees to your proposal. Good story. Like hoe he bonded with little Philip, who will o ly have memories of Phil as his father.

Wow!! Great Story!! Loved it!!

Sweet