All Comments on 'I Have Two Friends... Ch. 02'

by jlltec

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
a little change maybe

I would have told her, OK you're the boss. I will lick their pussies but only after I fucked them, so I will lap up my own cum just like I do for you. Would she have agreed ? Guess not. And to what is this leading up to? For her to go out and fuck others and him waiting for her to clean her up. No way. What you do out of love for your wife shouldn't be brought out to the street or being used to be manipulated to open up her side of the marriage.

jackofthedawnjackofthedawnabout 15 years ago
Good story, needs better proofreading

I love the theme, the story, the pacing. It's a shame your editor is letting you down. How could he or she miss 2 typos in the very first sentence:

"She reached out and loving pushed back on my erections making the head bulge, and then lightly kissed it and slid her mouth onto me."

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Submissive Male

Can't wait for Monday.

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