All Comments on 'I Hire Monica the Maid'

I AM NOT A CRITIC...AND I DON'T WANT TO BE ONE, I JUST LIKE GOOD STORY LINES, AND THIS IS A VERY GOOD ONE AND HOPE THERE IS MORE OF YOU TWO TOGETHER...! FOR ALL OTHERS, LET'S SEE YOU WRITE SOMETHING, IF YOU ARE SUCH A CRITIC OF OTHERS, LET'S READ SOME OF YOUR WORKS...! BETTY jo xoxo

Well mister business man, I didn't know what to expect...sometime finding that male writters (sorry I know not all men are like this) go right for the cum shot and don't put much into the story. I guess I'm more cerebrale and need context, backround psychology, or just a good story line.

That being said, I like knowing were I stand with a caracter, and with the business man its was clear. So no deception on my part, I could simply let myself open up to the story. I liked the naration and look forward to reading more of your stories.

Josie

Please enjoy all of my stories.

Josie- spellcheck please…. yikes.

Business man Great story- I want more of you and the maid! Really hot.