by BarelyJust
I expected some resistance to this story line. Following four lesbian tales with this foray into group sex, and specifically, male/male sex, was a recipe for resistance from the audience I had built up. And, indeed, the scores this story has received are significantly lower. But, I'm happy I wrote it. It was a departure and fun to write. I will be returning to my women in my next story and hope that will make my loyal readers happy. Sadly, I saw that one of my 'fans' has dropped me from his Favorite Authors list. Come back, Shane!
Finally, for the mathematicians among you: my first story got 16 comments. The secong one got 8, the third got 4, the fourth got 2, and now my comment here gives Ch. 5 one response. Cheating on my part, I know (kind of like stuffing the ballot box), but cool nonetheless.
I thought this was a strong entry on its own, and also fits in fine with what has gone before.
I know that readers sometimes react with disappointment when they're thrown a 'curveball', but I hope they can relax and take this one in stride!
It makes perfect sense, going back to the Chopin-listening reminiscences and all, that the husbands could get to join in with the inclusive bi-polyamorous ambience of the story. So it's logical, and does no 'harm', in my view, to its strengths as a lesbian saga.
Anyway it turned out terrific!
As one who reads the lesbian stories, I wasn't so sure about this (men, blowjobs, and orgies aren't exactly my thing), but I decided to read it because it was part of the series. I did enjoy it! Maybe a little. :) ~ L
Loved this story...very hot especially by including the husbands. I am very much liking this entire series as it is very well written and shows the deep emotion and sensual physicality ....keep it up as I know I am.
this chapter I did not like too much, the woman and the 2 husbands tricked Richard, and if I was him I would have been more than upset,I would have been down right mad at the wife's and the other 2 guys for going along with it drunk or not, this should have been a fair contest and all this just to come up with a way to tell their husbands about what they were doing, and even though things turned out alright with the woman I still think they should not have tricked Richard into it