All Comments on 'I Just Don't Know . . . Ch. 05'

by BarelyJust

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BarelyJustBarelyJustalmost 14 years agoAuthor
From the Author

I expected some resistance to this story line. Following four lesbian tales with this foray into group sex, and specifically, male/male sex, was a recipe for resistance from the audience I had built up. And, indeed, the scores this story has received are significantly lower. But, I'm happy I wrote it. It was a departure and fun to write. I will be returning to my women in my next story and hope that will make my loyal readers happy. Sadly, I saw that one of my 'fans' has dropped me from his Favorite Authors list. Come back, Shane!

Finally, for the mathematicians among you: my first story got 16 comments. The secong one got 8, the third got 4, the fourth got 2, and now my comment here gives Ch. 5 one response. Cheating on my part, I know (kind of like stuffing the ballot box), but cool nonetheless.

CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaalmost 14 years ago
BarelyJust, it worked just great

I thought this was a strong entry on its own, and also fits in fine with what has gone before.

I know that readers sometimes react with disappointment when they're thrown a 'curveball', but I hope they can relax and take this one in stride!

It makes perfect sense, going back to the Chopin-listening reminiscences and all, that the husbands could get to join in with the inclusive bi-polyamorous ambience of the story. So it's logical, and does no 'harm', in my view, to its strengths as a lesbian saga.

Anyway it turned out terrific!

elle_9549elle_9549over 12 years ago
I enjoyed it

As one who reads the lesbian stories, I wasn't so sure about this (men, blowjobs, and orgies aren't exactly my thing), but I decided to read it because it was part of the series. I did enjoy it! Maybe a little. :) ~ L

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 10 years ago
I wish there were 6 stars!

Great story!!!

gtbuzzncgtbuzzncover 10 years ago
excellent story

Loved this story...very hot especially by including the husbands. I am very much liking this entire series as it is very well written and shows the deep emotion and sensual physicality ....keep it up as I know I am.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
sorry

this chapter I did not like too much, the woman and the 2 husbands tricked Richard, and if I was him I would have been more than upset,I would have been down right mad at the wife's and the other 2 guys for going along with it drunk or not, this should have been a fair contest and all this just to come up with a way to tell their husbands about what they were doing, and even though things turned out alright with the woman I still think they should not have tricked Richard into it

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