by MountainDewMan
Will his sister be pregnant with Tanner's baby batter>
I hope you make the sister fertile.
Please keep the series going until his sister wants Tanner.
That's more of a revelation than a secret. Now, her telling him that she knew all along she was fucking her bother, now THAT would be a secret.
Hope the next chapter is soon, great writing, great concept.
I like the story.
I wish it was fleshed out more. Maybe in latter chapters?
I am not a fan of sub 2 page chapters. It's like watching a movie with too many commercial breaks.
I must agree, this could really use a last chapter, that ends it. It’s a too good story for it to end this way, as I have said before, your story’s tend to end much too early, lacking that finishing touch that would transform a good story into a great story.
I hope you will give this a proper ending.
This story could really use one more chapter to tie up all the loose ends and bring it to it’s conclusion.
Quandary with this one.
I don’t know wether to like it or hate it.
Very provocative in either case.
I have to give it a 4 star rating in either case.
Not what I was looking for in Literotica, but a good tale.
Bill S.
Great story, I really wish you would continue it though, I can see a few more chapters. 5 stars
Great story. Just wish you would continue it. Would like to find out what the cause was.