All Comments on 'I Like My Coffee Black'

by Mila_York

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Rawmaster60Rawmaster60over 7 years ago
Very well done.

Enjoyed the humor at the awkward situation between the older lady and the younger man. The inner voice of her feelings about the relationship and the fantasies playing out in her imagination was a sweet mix.

I m sure someone will send you critical review about the inappropriate relationship and such. Or a misspelled word, but I enjoyed this. Please write more for us..

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Controversy of feelings

In the midst of the storm of life, an oasis of seductive passion.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), is not my native language.

Crusader235Crusader235over 7 years ago
Nice!

Very nice first story. Hope you keep them coming. Thank you for it.

Mila_YorkMila_Yorkover 7 years agoAuthor
Rawmaster60 and TheOldRomantic

Thank you for your kind words!

tendernsweet2tendernsweet2over 7 years ago
Better ....

This could not have been any better if you would of had 3 writers as it was though you did not need them.!^ Really enjoyed the read and looking for more from you in the future. A+ all the way around.!**

Mila_YorkMila_Yorkover 7 years agoAuthor
Crusader and tendernsweet

I'm glad you liked it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This was a romance!

Excellent story. There are too many authors here that use romance for their stories when they are really “loving Wife” stories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I humbly disagree

This was not a romance. EC would have been a better choice.

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