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Click here"Rolley, hope Karen's special style of marriage counseling worked for you and Grace. Oh, you be sure to take the two of them to the Flyers' game. She'll love it. Everybody goes there for the fights!"
Epilogue
All went smoothly despite Karen's efforts to derail the divorce, and baring that, trying to get half of the assets. Wifey wheedled and pleaded, but our contract held. I was rid of her on my terms. I did wonder what I would have done had she gone on the straight and narrow. Would I have stayed married? If ifs and ands were pots and pans, there'd be no need for tinker's hands.
Roland and Grace split up. Karen tried to get transferred to Wilmington so they could live together. Last I heard, they split up and Karen was living in Tulsa. Good riddance.
What a long and boring story. Husband is a stupid stupid weakling who deserves every crapp his wife threw at him. Siriosly who talks like that? I just wonder his wife didn't cheat on him sooner. Awful dialogs. Poor writing.
2starrs
Bit too clinical. Lot of dialog that while well written, hard to believe anyone talks like that in real life with their spouse.
stupid story. he spevt way to much time with his dumbass setup to get the goods on the bitch.
5 Star
Best story on affairs. Got the dumb bitch to sign a post-nupt. Roland got divorced so there was some payback not enough but oh well. In the end he came out only losing 10k and had no love for the cunt.
5 stars because it's so funny. many good scenes, thanks for writing it.
Stupid story. Why would she push forward knowing he’s watching her like a hawk? Why did he make elaborate plans to trick her. Just divorce her and expose her. Zero blowback on Roland. Dumb
Your dialogue is stilted and unnatural. Turgid, even. Listen a little and try to get a sense of how real people speak to each other.
Or, just keep writing these awful stories about overbearing assholes, if you prefer.
Well, We-The-Readers do not have enough information to know the stage of the seduction, but if WTR go by Sweetie’s assurances to Hubby, she was seeing herself as a Good Samaritan. Even if the seduction were several steps beyond that, Sweetie’s motel words and actions were premature/unrealistic. (But convenient for Author’s/Hubby’s mission!) If WTR grant that Sweetie was already seduced at start of the tale, then Hubby shoulda just divorced her citing irreconcilable differences.
Problem … since Sweetie is never presented with Hubby’s audio-video evidence, her confession to her ‘one time’ folly makes no sense.