by lovethosepanties
Reading your series on a lazy weekend has transported me to your world. Thank you for the lovely fantasies!!! VPLs, panties and beautiful women - 6 stars out of 5!
These were a good read, I really enjoyed them. There is a fair amount of grammar work still needed and I think one sentence was a complete write-off for me as I couldn't fully understand what I was reading at all. Not claiming to be an expert myself, don't get me wrong, just offering some advice. Overall an interesting read though and I look forward to reading anything in the future that you add to it.
More, More, More! I can deal with the occasional odd grammar and missing comma, but for fuck's-sake, please - PLEASE* finish the story! You are a Master Bard! :D
I loved this story, and frankly look forward to reading the rest of the weekend's fun! As a devout panty lover, this story had me hard the whole time. Please hurry with the rest of the story!
This story is awesome! As a pantylover, I hope Mike will getting on panties in the following story…
Now hang on a minuet there has got to be an ending to this ???? i NEED to know what plans Sally had take note * NEED TO KNOW * NOW GET WRITING LOL , you cannot just leave us hanging like this ,
What a turn on!! Would to be in Mikes situation, being mobbed by three horny women in panties and no inhibitions.