All Comments on 'I love you mommy Pt. 01'

First, kudos for putting yourself out there for writing this story. I liked the characters and the build up. I liked the dialogue and banter. I will be looking for part 2. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Very erotic....cant wait for pt 2 and 3 and 4 and........

"some of they most loving memories I have from you are laying like this, feeding." Such beautiful for words for a son to hear. It seems for all of us that were fortunate suck their mothers breasts later in life, thoughts revert back to nursing. That bond instantly happens again no matter how many years it had been.

Loved it! Please continue and hope she gets pregnant by her son. Nothing better than having a sexual relationship with your Mom. She’s the only woman that can fully take care of your needs. A special bond between Mother and Son.

Great story. See this chapter one .I cannot wait for more chapters. Will be looking forward to read. TY

Fantastic story, please write Chapter Two!!

Great start. Hope there is more coming

This story is so full of love, the sex

is running in second place.

MOMS breasts win hands down,

and the fucking was great, can you

beat that. Well done very good read.

...THANK YOU...

Well done

Great story, you had me hard when he started nursing on his mom's breast. The love and sex just got better and better, then it ended. There's got to be a part 2, at least. Also loved it when she gave her son her panties to sniff and use, way to go Mom.

The only complaint I have is the overuse of "Mommy", He starts with calling her "Mom" but then reverts to calling her "Mommy", like a small child. I've never screwed my mother but I don't think I would start calling her Mommy. Any of you MFs have any input on that, would love to hear your side.

It's still a five star story. Thanks

What a beautiful love story about a Son and his Mother. So erotic, sexy and hot. I hope their story continues

For me is when authors can't figure out how to make their story interesting without involving a significant / substantial loss for the characters involved. There are many other ways you could have had the mother still lactating such as her having the child or possibly even giving the child up for adoption. Or you could have had the mother volunteer as a surrogate to get some additional money.

Other than that issue your story is quite good and I did give you a 5-star rating.