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All Comments on 'I Make You My Own'

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jmkuehnjmkuehnabout 4 years ago
Continuity

You have her wearing pants and a skirt at the same time and him wearing pants and swim trunks. These are minor details but they ruin the reading experience when you miss them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
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Nice tone.

"You take the queue and do the same."

Cue=queue

DreaMajorDreaMajoralmost 4 years ago
Sweet

Very tame but sexy and loving. What’s not to love?

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I'm Julie, AKA Flowers, a young erotica author looking to make a name for herself. I have a growing collection of stories, and I'm looking to delve into more and more different things (read: kinks). You can check out my website at the link under "Contact", and my Reddit at u/F...