All Comments on 'I Need More'

Not the ending I expected. Well written.

Not erotic! Waste is not cool!

If hubby loves her that much, he may be able to get her the help she needs as he obviously wants her despite her excess weight. I hope you have a sequel in mind. If you do, though, please remember that a waist is not a waste.

I agree. Definitely have a sequel in mind. Wanted to explore different tropes and turn them on their head. In this case, husband thinks the wife is hot. She just has a low self image.

I suspect they will both have some fun, do things their not proud of and come out of it stronger in the end.

Learn the English language. Learn to not write absolute crap. Where are all of the good authors?

Sequel? Fuck that. Erase this. The score alone should tell you no one likes it. Do us a favor and stick to your rape stories.

It's they're, not their. That in a nutshell is your problem trying to write.

Totally confused. She stated she and her husband aren't enough for each other. It sounds as though her husband is happy with her but he isn't enough to sayisfy her.

please get an editor & review before posting - Thank you.

I'm sorry to admit but men cheating on me is a HUGE turn on. I hate that men always write about women being sluts and cheaters on Literotica. I wish the stories here were way more about men who cheat on their wives and us wives knowing but turning a blind eye to it. I'm sorry but for me men that cheat are just too virile for one woman and VIRILE men are a huge turn on. I LOVED this story because I have been though it a bunch of times. btw, it is WAY harder to make this happen than you think