by elia_cdl
the writing is better than just OK. I guess there are a number of each kind in the world. So if it's their cup of
whatever they like, so let it be. I think it's stupid to go that way : sharing a part is loosing a part, something that is never coming back. G.Belgium
A sure ride on the suicide bus. It can be erotic without being totally stupid.
Not one but two sick wimps.This is a little stupid,but you will continue on anyway.I guess studs not married,but why be when you live in a world where you take other mens wives and they love it?
If you want to fuck around WHY stay married. At the very least in this story the husband should go out every night and fuck who HE wants hopefully someone better looking and better at sex than his wife and then let him come home and tell her exactly what he did if this makes the wife horney then he should start running if however it upsets her then he might just might have a marriage or at least a relationship left.
Excellent opening. At the moment, your protagonists are getting off on the fantasy; how it plays out from this point (if at all) will be up to you. Maybe Marge is just play acting (lots of couples do), or maybe she's always wanted to take Mike for a testdrive; hell, maybe she'd like to have Mike <i>and</i> Jim tag team? Whichever, attacking the series at this stage is plain dumb.
too much porn DVD's and, after a while, they are no longer enough. you then go on fantasizing about real women being subject to spit upon, urinated upon, dumb upon; but after a while those, too, are not enough... <p>
that's when the big white man from the suburb pimps out his darling "glass hour" shaped blue-eyed blonde wife to the brothers in the inner city. he even drives her there, to some motel room he rents, or invite them over, after the middle school kids were driven to their grannies. <p>
the wife, of course, is giddy over fucking a whole bunch or romantic big dicked brothers, who pick her up like a little barbie doll and pummel her like a child, sandwiched between them, sometimes two, sometimes three. <p>
"we gonna crack some nuts, we gonna crack some nuts," Jamal yells. <p>
"you don't dare pull out, you ni---; my whife wants to feel all your lovely juices!" <p>
"but I have some clap --- some fuckin' white whore gave something to me last month --- and I don't wanna put your wife Susan here in danger!", Jamal, though he likes white women, if they was pretty, he still has some shreds of conscience in him, for some strange reasons,,, <p>
"don't worry, Jamal, danger is my name!," the wife smiles. <p>
"come deep in my. my dutiful and loving husband, who is taping all this, he will be licking all the juices out of me, soon as you and Mbutu pull out of my holes!" <p>
"okay, if that's how y'all wan it," Jamal relents...
The previous commentator who wrote about addiction said all the negative aspects of being a selfish male into weak freaky self disgust - then gave the story a score of 100. <P>
While I'm sure it was a mistake on the score the comments were spot on regarding the writers addictive self cuckolding himself nature.<P>
As the writer continues to spiral downwards in self delivered selfish pain his jaded numbness will soon require more to get it up. Just like nothing else will now - soon a more squalid self demeanment will be necessary for him to jack off.<P>
Now his only pleasure and purpose is to cause the young and weak to sink to his sick level as misery loves sick company.<P>
All I can see is a sick waste of talent by a sick mind going down.
No development to explain why wife is looking to get laid or why husband would permit it. Sucks.
Decently written, and one knows what is coming with this author. It is still hard to read. You just want to say to the guy; "What the hell is wrong with you?"
Two - countem 2 things mark your continued presence here.<P>
Your only theme of the desired loss of your manhood and the talent wasted to tell your sad subhuman sick desires. You must dwell on this addiction day in and day out.<P>
Get some help little sick one.
i loved it, i cant wait to show this story to my husband. this is every woman's dream. and for all those people who left a negative comment it just shows that u all have small cocks.
Maybe one of the people who liked this story could explain, what is erotic about a cheating whore? What is erotic about a nutless wonder of a husband? This is the loving wives category, but I seem to have missed any part of "loving wife" or the normal and good parts of marraige. Maybe one of our resident "I used to sex up my wife till I discovered I like sucking cock and being her humilliated slave" type of person could answer this question, though I suspect I know the answer already; has nothing to do with good marraige, nothing to do with loving wives, and everything to do with base, disgusting and self destructive behavior which all people should rightly condemn.
dog shit type of story. Glad to see this author has quit writing this trashy shit.
I agree with Anonymous in Australia,very sexy,it's sad about all the negative comments though, hopefully it won't put writers off. Looking forward to next part.
From a old pervert single bitter man who gets his kicks writing foul perverse stories. What I don't understand is why anyone normal would like this perverson, to be cockold and humilated is fun? W.T.F.
... it's too late for you to try I think. Why don't you read some stuff from the Ronald Reagan Memorial Library ? Literotica seems to be a waste of time for all of you who can't spell the word cuckold.
Hi Elia, why doesn't you proof them all wrong and continue the story ?
Please take the time to write more about this same married couple
of our sexuality. Unfortunately Loving Wives has become an easy target for the many twisted joyless saddoes out there. If Literotica won't change the rules, the really good writers won't come out to play anymore. The site destroys itself. Taliban Cunts.MC
He should be sure that's what he wants just not what his wife wants. There's no taking it back after she fucks him, and he might resent her getting fucked and him not. I think that would be enough to piss most men off, with the wife getting all of the fun and the husband left holding his own cock in his hand.............Rich
"I could feel my dick stirring as I watched. I was ready to move across the floor and put a stop to it, but my cock had gotten big and hard"
As soon as I read the foregoing, I stopped reading and rated it 1* because it was obvious it is just another of the common "Watching a man with a big dick fuck my wife makes me jack off. I don't care to read stories about married queers.
Thought the story was good and rated it highly. What doesn't turn one person on may do so for another so please keep highly critical thoughts, i.e. name calling, to your self and if a story doesn't please you move on to another. Some of us like these and don't consider ourselves queer.
Hope there is a part 2............good start
Loved the start and the thoughts that are building in their heads. Both love the interaction want to see what will happen.
I really enjoyed this story. Very well written and high erotic value. The story line is different and refreshing. I hope there is a part 2 coming soon>
This was a brilliant story because it was so, so ordinary and suburban. What happened was actually plausible, believable, and likely to happen. This scene could play out for any of us in our suburbs!
Thus, the genius of this story is that it was low key, plausible and explored the developing sexuality between an ordinary couples. The restraint exercised by the author was appreciated and added to the erotic charge.
Most of us live in the suburbs. They are nice and quiet, sometimes even a little boring. After the first 3 – 5 years the parties get predictable with the same couples invited, and basically the same discussion topics.
This story is exactly how my wife became a hot wife after about three years in our suburb. For me it was actually much, much hotter watching her seduction instead of my having another woman. Sloppy seconds were so, so exciting that I did not want other women. A wife pumped full of another man´s cum is a wife worth being faithful too!
Well we have now been living in this suburb for 15 years and my wife has has a steady supply of lovers, it has juiced up our sex life and we did not have to go crazy with Craig´s list or swing clubs to have some fun. Suburban Hot Wives can limit STDs and some of the other crazy things that can go along with the lifestyle.
Actually, this has been good for the men in the neighborhood, because when they start getting fat she tells them to get to the gym our get out of our bed!
Great story! The title could be “Hot Wifing In the Burbs!”
THE STORY IS VERY EROTIC but the eroticism is understaded, it hangs in the air if you know what i mean.
Characters are REALISTIC.
The wife is a LOVING WIFE & a KEEPER!
This is a LOVE STORY & A SEX STORY 2 in 1.
This is one of my favourites. Hopefully you or someone else continues this tale.
This story is a MUST READ!
Good story. When we were younger, my wife was felt up at many of the parties we attended. It became normal to witness someone with his hands down her knickers. She loved the attention and I gave my permission to take it as far as she wanted, which she did and we all had a great time
10 stars. I really liked how the wife was talking to hubby. I got me going as well. What a Hottie.
What is up with all these derogatory remarks? Morons read what story is about, then read the story and complain that the story was just as described. That is pretty moronic. This was one of my favorite stories I've read on here. Wife didn't cheat, just got felt up some. I had a wife once that was a real hit at parties, she couldn't say "NO" if someone felt up her tits! LOL I found this story very hot when the wife sat the hubby down to talk. Very Hot. I even had to read it to my wife. tho it wasn't as good that way.
This story needs a chapter 2 and maybe 3!! Let me know when you've posted such!
One of the sexiest stories on this website,
and I love that its so short.
Well done.
shr