by carlieplum
This is the best writing I've read on this site. You are a talented writer. If you are equally talented in bed, your mate is one very lucky guy!
Good story...short and spare...just teetering on the edge of abusive but leaving the reader to decide. Not sure that I like would like to have Brandt as a friend... but as a lover?...maybe
Great story line. I especially enjoyed that you created this one within the Mind Control genre. How about casting another spell over us with more stories like this one?
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