All Comments on 'I Really Like Your Friends'

A bit annoying.

It had potential – the beginning showed you can write, show emotions, build characters and characteristics.

Then came the sex part – mechanics without much sense and without building a minimal care between me (reader) - and the protagonist. So I didn’t care and stopped reading.

I don't like the "I" and "you" approach. However, thought the story was pretty hot, otherwise.

Wow, that was hot!!!!

typo in the very first line, unfortunately not the only obvious one, and how many times does 'prostrate' (prone, laying down) have to sneak in incorrectly before authors and editors begin to take notice? or care?

fast action, which is okay if that's your thing. but could have taken a bit more space to develop the scene and captured the reader's attention better.

3 stars