by Harddaysknight
Deserves a better score than I gave it before.
Wish we were allowed to change scores.
It is almost gallows humor. Cavalier? Maybe a touch of British influence?
The problem is that he is very good at instilling a sense of reality and the ability to touch on some real emotions in the mix.
Thank you.
What story was Just Words reading?.The one I read wasn't funny, just a load of garbage.
The three named commentators need to get out more,this was just a pile of crap.
First story of this author I read. I'll skip the rest. With so many writers here the site should have authors classified. For example, this would be for men who want to suck some other man's cum off his wife's breast. Not my cup of tea. If your in to that stuff, this is a 5 star story. Ugh!
Husband and wife sexual banter can be priceless. Teasing is so much fun! A 5 Star Rating.
Gotta love sucking up that goo-splashed titty, she should forget put on her top more often, if you get my meaning. 5*.
I just read it again. I love it when a good author pokes fun at the usual stories here.
Some of the comments are even better. I guess some readers can't stand a happy ending.
My wife and I both enjoyed this story. Loved the playfulness and the surprise twist at the end. This is the first of your stories we've read. We will have to read more.
It's really funny when you consider how many.of these commenters don't have a sense of humor.
they should just disable the anonymous comment option. so many retards commenting stupid shit. to think that these guys get to vote is kinda scary.
Some commentators did not read the last few paragraphs cafefully.
Very funny !
sorry, its probably just me, but that wasnt funny sexy or cute. way too many buttons pushed.rk