All Comments on 'I Saw Her Standing There'

Ah memories of the Tour de Home Appliances.Best stage,denim jeans on spin cycle.

Nice story. BardnotBard

A little short.

Haha great story, super silly. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Cocu et salope... histoire nulle.

A real clunker.

[13.11.22]

Fun und Funny!

11/10!!!!!

whore and wimp .

5 Stars

Couldn’t be funnier!

Plz may WE have another….!

Absolutely worthless!!!!!

Wasted effort!!!!

sorry, its probably just me, but that wasnt funny sexy or cute. way too many buttons pushed.rk

Some commentators did not read the last few paragraphs cafefully.

Very funny !

Laughed me ass off!

Great story with a funny ending 5 stars

Ha!!! Loved it.

too funny

Bullshit

LOL

Good fun ! 5⭐️

no suspence

Really sucked the big green weinie.

Fun,

they should just disable the anonymous comment option. so many retards commenting stupid shit. to think that these guys get to vote is kinda scary.

nasty whore ,divorce her wimp.

Typical from this author, i bet he or she is a feminazi.

Good classic fun short from HDK. Thanks

Great story, typical of this author

It's really funny when you consider how many.of these commenters don't have a sense of humor.

Close call...

Great little story

Great short story, with a good twist at the end

More crap.

Still as fun a read as it was the first two times.

Load of crap.

My wife and I both enjoyed this story. Loved the playfulness and the surprise twist at the end. This is the first of your stories we've read. We will have to read more.

Wonderfull, I feared the worst.

I liked it. Read it sometime in the past and it's still good.

I just read it again. I love it when a good author pokes fun at the usual stories here.

Some of the comments are even better. I guess some readers can't stand a happy ending.

Gotta love sucking up that goo-splashed titty, she should forget put on her top more often, if you get my meaning. 5*.

...of Anonymouse-y's poor reading comprehension skills.

Talk like this makes for an eventful marriage, very good.

Husband and wife sexual banter can be priceless. Teasing is so much fun! A 5 Star Rating.

First story of this author I read. I'll skip the rest. With so many writers here the site should have authors classified. For example, this would be for men who want to suck some other man's cum off his wife's breast. Not my cup of tea. If your in to that stuff, this is a 5 star story. Ugh!

The three named commentators need to get out more,this was just a pile of crap.

What story was Just Words reading?.The one I read wasn't funny, just a load of garbage.

...and well worth the read. That was fun!

It is almost gallows humor. Cavalier? Maybe a touch of British influence?

The problem is that he is very good at instilling a sense of reality and the ability to touch on some real emotions in the mix.

Thank you.

Deserves a better score than I gave it before.

Wish we were allowed to change scores.

What a load of crap.How can anyone speak well of this suit?.

Good little tease of a story. Enjoyed it.

Too funny!

I am always amazed at readers that try to argue with the author as to the intentions of his characters... The characters are... And the story is what the author says it is... That said... The story WAS a little lame... Actually ive read a group of your stories and while you're a good writer... I'm at a loss trying to understand how you got the "beyond criticism" rep that you have here... Your short stories in particular are just average in creativity... As always... Jmo

-jaye-

That story, early on called this one of yours to mind

...vibrates like crazy??? Send it back as defective, and ask for a replacement without delivery charges. It’s not your fault. Geezz. Get with it.

How do people dream up garbage like this?

No cuckold in this story, just crude banter. The problem I have with the story is Brook is just annoying. Hard to like a story when half of the characters is odious.

I don't get it. ?-:

There are sorry readers out there that want a cuckold story with lots of cheating that way they won't feel like the only ones that do it. So sorry for them

Big shout out to HDK for his excellent stories, although the writing is so droll that it seems lost on many of the "anonymous" commenters, who seem to enjoy making nasty comments. But then, we live in the age of “fake” news, internet trolls, preposterous claims by some politicians and so forth. Maybe its a sign of the times! Many thanks for the amusing and tightly written pieces.

pissing off the wannabe ccucks!

Good for those humorless bastards to get riled up a bit since this story site is their entire fucking world, heh heh.

5*

Strange, It's just me but I don't find your stories funny at all! They are disgusting and twisted!

Why are there so many trolls who don't get your stories? This was sweet, funny, and sexy.

a loving couple with no (zero, nada, none) sex outside of their marriage. They both have a quick wit and great sense of humor. I am surprised at how many commenters over the years have wrongly determined that the husband is a cuckold and the wife a slut. This was meant to be a funny story about a loving couple. There was no cheating or cuckolding, yet readers are "puking". I feel sick, too, when I realize that reading comprehension is so uncommon. To those that actually understand and enjoy the story.... thanks!

This is the worst story I've read. Actually, I didn't finish it. I went into the bathroom and puked.

.... cheating WHORE wife Apologist! This writer couldn't "burn the bitch" if she was soaked in gasoline and he was holding a blow torch!

Here's an opportunity to prove this anon wrong HDK which I hope you are "man" enough to accept and won't "wimp" out on! The challenge is to write a BTB story without your usual female excuses like "I was also having a lot of hot flashes, and when it mixed with the wine, I went stupid" (see story above), where the "wronged" husband is actually in the right, he knows "it", she knows "it" and "real" consequences to **her** are the results of her actions .... and those consequences do not include your usual "punishment" (the husband moving into the guest bedroom for a week, him giving her the silent treatment for a month before rolling over and playing dead like the family dog or whatever excuse(s) that you have used in the past to save the guilty wife). A story that is so totally out of character for you that your readers (and there are quite a few judging by the comments to this submission) check the author's name to make sure it is you!

Why should you accept this challenge? No real reason other than to show the audience you can escape your comfort zone, that you can get back at a**hole anons like this one and "maybe" be thought of as a author whose "label" is not completely correct!

Frankly it's doubtful you will read this much less act up it but stranger things have happened! For once prove me/us wrong!

As they say "the balls in your court" so don't dribble it off your foot.

Signed .... "Another a**hole Anon"

...was had by all! Thanks for another good laugh!

Everyone should read this every time they feel life is getting to much, if only to feel again. I love the way the husbands part has been written to make him sound like a little middle aged frustrated, frigid and bossy witch, filled with venom and hatred

A very humerous story about a well matched couple compels an eruption of hateful-politically charged comments

Better Trump Than Hilly-billy

I laughed so hard that I read it twice more just to make sure the humor stayed with me all day

And not really worthy of your talent, HDK.

Yeah

I hate Trump and this story so tough shit all you keyboard commandos....

Just for the hell of it Love you all! GREG OH 90% OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE

This clever and funny little story is hated by people who lack reading comprehension. They must be trump supporters. When they aren't denying global warming on Yahoo, they are leaving their bile here on Lit. Stupidity has become a serious disease in this county. We are truly sick.

For the twist and the laugh.

its a story! its funny! it has a twist!

get a grip you thick cunts ITS A FUCKING STORY! NOT REAL! MADE UP! GEDDIT!?

no i doubt you do.

5 points i loved it

Useless story about a poor subject.

Not exactly Betty White, so who is she taking after for a good time girl?

And 90% of the LW commenters are closet cuckolds.

Just stupid. 1* is a stretch.

when a fib will work just as well. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very funny and refreshing to read a quick laugh like this. Well done!

Proves that 80% of the population is stupid.

cuckold bullshit.

Are you commentators THAT stupid? This was a wife and her husband playing games with each other. Teasing one another and having some good sex between the two of them. Now the kitchen may be a mess. But the wife wasn't screwing around on her husband in this story. Anyone who thinks otherwise either didn't read the story or is just plain dumb. Nice story. Both fun and entertaining.

Just read some previous comments. Seriously? This is just playful banter between two people in love with each other. Anyone who actually thinks she cheated is pretty naive.

five stars. A humorous flash tale. Thanks.

Some of you people are retarded. This is a work of fiction!! In fiction you accept as truth the reality as written by the author. The reality here is a humorous encounter between a husband and his wife where there is no cheating or lovers servicing the wife.....just a messy kitchen. That's the premise and the reality of this story. You people would be better served by providing your lame observations to "Dear Abby" .

Kudos to the author....5 stars.

Anybody who doesn't think she just screwed those delivery guys, I've got a bridge in Brooklyn you might be interested in!

dumb hubby. now that she knows she can deceive you, you dumb shit.

so a guy gets home and his wife is walking around naked. she teases him about cheating and he just trusts her. what a dumbass. i know the writer wants you to think that maybe she didnt cheat. but come on if she takes off her dress or shirt because of a mess. why would she also take off her bra and panties. and once she is naked why doesnt she go up to her room and get clothes. their is something really fucked up in this story.

Denial! "MY wife would NEVER cheat on me!" Yeah buddy, you keep thinking that.

GOOD LAUGH!!

This was really funny stuff. He isn't a cuckold. His wife is just a little messy and they obviously have a loving relationship in which they enjoy each other. Some teasing was going on in this one. She didn't have sex with the boys because Home Depot had delivered the day before. And the "stuff" all over her was from the blender. People really ought to at least READ the story before commenting. Good story. Ignore the trolls and keep on writing.

this website is being taken over by the right wing assholes and misogynists. They are too stupid to read a story and understand what they are reading. Their hatred of women is so intense that they cannot see the forest for the trees.

Geez, this whole website is being pulled down by these jerks.

The last few comments on this very funny story with a truly loving wife illustrate the dumbing down of Literotica.

At least put cockold in the description of the story that way I will not read it and get sick. I hate cockold stories where the husband likes it. YUCK

he thinks it is a joke, but he is really just a cuck and doesn't realize it yet.

And entertaining to boot!

and definitely not to my liking.

Funny stuff.