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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Interesting build up

ipreferoralipreferoral2 months ago

A mystery - mother, daughter? The only thing putting me off is the number of small grammar mistakes: peak should be peek, snuggly should be snugly, clients' should be clients. Your writing is good enough that, if it were to be a bit better, it could be great, if that makes any sense.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Nice premise.

Nice back story.

Interesting buildup.

Well written.

Five stars.

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