All Comments on 'I Take The Farmer's Wife'

Because it's a well-realised fantasy that could be real.

But you need to sharpen up on your use of words. In just one paragraph there were NINE 'cock's and 'pussy' showed five times.

Get a Roget's Thesaurus, and vary your vocabulary. You could be a good writer. But you need to work at it.

The ambience you created was artful, the premise enticing. Sometimes, overdescribed sex scenes, or those in which writers go out of their way to vary descriptions of the involved body parts, can go awry, so I wouldn't try to go way out on a limb in following the previous poster's admittedly valid advice. I'm a sucker for girls submitting themselves to men, for whatever reason, and enjoying themselves all the while. She is a fully-drawn character who both needs and loves to fuck; this is not often encountered in erotic stories. Well done and more, please? I want to see where this goes!

What a great story !! I never had that kind of luck - lol.

Please keep writing about their adventures and how Sasha repays her rescuer. Maybe, she will show him about how well she can tit fuck ??

Thanks again.

You apparently think dry fucking with both of them having their (endlessly described) jeans is sexy? It sounds like two teenagers making oout (or trying to) in the back seat.

Grow up and pay attention to the fact that your stories are disintegrating as they go. It's easy to see that for you all women are cunts who have no brains only sexual urges.

Actually. This story was sexy as hell and it made me cum over and over (: keep writing and ignore ignorant jackasses! Love to read more! thankszz

The Bridges of Madison County with a much sexier ending. Bravo! Encore! Never have I read about such, hot, sticky sex; such wonderful word pictures! I am totally enjoying reading your work, story after story.

Discovered you just today with new story THE DRIFTER Ch.01 posted here.

What were you doing for the past two years when you didn't post anything?

I loved the European look with the woman in pigtails, pushed up tits etc. i thought i was at Octoberfest