by firstkiss
I love this storyline and was so happy to see another chapter.
I think all of your stories are fantastic but this one is something special. Can't wait for more!!
Please, please, please do continue...this is a fantastic story and we want more :D
So glad to see the next chapter. This chapter was great and I can't wait to read more.
that Mallory is! I was so happy to see another installment of this great story - thank you for updating!
So glad you updated this story! This one and Not My Type are my favorites!
You need to hurry up and update ASAP! its really good well done.
You need to hurry up and update ASAP! its really good well done.
I hope you enjoyed your summer! It was worth the wait for this chapter and I hope you don't keep us waiting quite as long for future installments!
I just read CH#01-06 nonstop. Absolutely terrific story. Superbly plotted, cunningly charactered, wonderfully told. There should be a special category for excellence over the course of a story.
I know it's selfish to be glad your break is over, but I can't help it. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Great to see you back!
I love this story, the sizzling chemistry between Clara and Daniel, the way you describe Clara's feelings.
Wonderful stuff.
More--and soon, <I>please</I>!
Glad to see you back.
I hope that Mallory gets his in the end, the worm.
You keep hooking us and baiting us with worms and twists like Mallory. Keep it going please?!
I had been waiting and waiting for an update to this story. and it was definitely worth it. I love this story!!! Please post again soon.
pleasw hurry and update. 3 months is soooo long to wait for this great story!
i hope that slime ball gets his in the end.i love this chapter and i'll wait desperately for the next
I am SO happy to see you're new installment. My stomach literally fluttered when I checked your page(like I do everyday), and saw your story count go from 23 to 24. YAY! It was a great story. This one, and "Not My Type" are definitely my faves. Can't wait for more updates! Hope you're summer break was worth torturing us. ;)
as always, your stories are wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks.
I enjoyed your new chapter. You foreshadowed beautifully and gave us all something to think about. You have us waiting in anticapation for the next chapter.
You are enjoyable to read and I look forward to your next chapter.
I am glad you reappeared.
yay!!! an update as always i love your stories and thank you sooo much for an update!!!
update soon!!!
Darlin,
You have a wonderful gift....loved your latest chapter....
You r so fuckin' good a writer,each of your stories leaves me reeling.Plz plz plz write more soon.Just try to write a bit more in each of the episodes,okay?
Really looking forward to finding out what happens next.
I love this story. It is clearly my favourite of all I have read on this site. What I love is the way the erotic story is so grounded in a real-life workplace, and that the characters are characters - not just walking genitalia.
I like the way you end the chapters, taking off in different directions.
First off, I truly love this work. It's by far my favorite piece on here. After rereading it numerous times, I couldn't help but see the similarities between this and Fifty Shades of Grey. Not sure if that's an insult or not if you actually aren't the author of the book...but I'm dying to know if you are. There's so many similarities. Anywho, such a great piece. Close to no complaints. Thank you.
I've been thinking something similar as I've been re-reading this (I love this story, thank you!), but with the difference that I think the author of FSOG might have read this first, before writing FSOG... Apologies if I offend anyone by this, but I think firstkiss is a much better writer than that author. But, who knows, it's all pure conjecture!
Anyway, can I just say it's a pleasure to read this again x
Love to here a woman's erotic perspective. Wonderful build up to a climax.