by firstkiss
Is this the final chapter, or will there be at least one more? I would love to hear about Daniel and Clara renovating this building, opening their own office and building a successful business and life together. Daniel definitely needed to strike out on his own. He's too strong of a personality to play second fiddle for 20 years (!) to a boss who didn't really appreciate him.
Sort of mirrors my current situation...loved reading this. If it's the last chapter, good ending. If not, I'm happy to see more!
It was good to find out about 1 of the Dragon's former wives. But the future relationship of the 2 main characters is still full of many questions and uncertainties. Good twist in this story. I hope there are many more twists in store. Maybe Clara can take charge and show this guy a few tricks.
I thought it was actually a very good conclusion, although I must admit I wouldn't mind a little more of the sex that was teased about in the chapter before. Seeing that's all they had it might be too soon to leave us to our own imginations.. wouldn't you say?
Sorry... I should have ended this chapter with the ubiquitous "to be continued"... we're not done yet!
Another amazing chapter and I can't wait to read more. Once you have all the chapters published I'll need to read the whole story at once.
This was a wonderful follow up to the last chapter. I'm looking forward to several more chapters (hint, hint).
You know just how to capture the moment and make it shine. Great job.
can't get enough!!! I'm early anticipating the next chapter!
You are the best writer ever! I'm so glad this wasn't the last chapter! And you forgot something, I love Daniel Sutcliffe too! hehe
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