All Comments on 'I Touch My Elf'

This is one of the most unique and entertaining stories I have read on this site, or for that matter anywhere else.

That was fun, I smiled the whole time reading it. Holly was adorable. Well done!

...should have had a visit like this. Oh, perhaps not---he would have ascribed it to an indigestion dream and docked Bob Cratchit's salary. A very enjoyable Seasonal fantasy, PP. May Eve have many more happy Christmas memories like this one.

Cinnamon and Spice and Everything Nice

Now that's a present! *****

One of the best written and playfully erotic stories I have read. This MUST win an award for a holiday story! This is destined to be a holiday tradition for me and my lovers from this holiday forward. Thank you for such a delightful journey!

Brilliant! 'I touch my elf' indeed! And the wit just goes on and on. A massive seasonal cinq etoiles and joyeux noel!

Wow! I wonder if I’m on the naughty or nice list this year, might be worth a try...

I laughed at the “straight as spaghetti”.

Thanks for the great story. Just randy enough to keep the magic from being cloying. 😎😎😎

"Besides, all elves go every which way including loose." Oh, my...

It was very long, but enjoyible.

What an awesome story. 5 stars! What a great idea.

Dear Santa...

Spectacularly Presented!!!

This was just a delight to read and "Wonderful Story" for the Christmas Season. The Storyline was a variant of the usual "Elf Story", and extremely well written. I was enthralled from the moment Eve arrived in the kitchen, and found Holly rummaging through the refrigerator.

An All Around 5*Star Performance🎉!!!!!

A delightfully sexy story. A great encouragement for everyone to stay on the nice list, excuse me while I go hang up my Christmas stocking in hope. Thank you a great story

I am so writing to Santa this year lol

Good story. Loved the perky Holly. Now, where do I get one of those candy canes?

fun, funny and likable. Somehow, the pseudonym "poison pen" for the writer doesn't fit this sweet story. Nice touches at the end, too, about drinking the water to flush the aphrodisiac out of her body...and having the ex-fiance flunk.

Had a sweet tone while being delightfully sexy

Sapphic stories don't usually work for me but this one was lovely. I came for the puns and stayed for the sex.

The title alone deserves special recognition via award. I'm still laughing.

Great title and a roller coaster of a ride full of puns and wit. Loved the ending. Well done. Fully deserves it's rating.

Perfect title for a long hot story. Loved how you kept Holly’s perk bright elf character throughout. Masterful use of the magic of Christmas. Not a catagory I would normally read but your writing maintain my interest and fully deserves 5*

Very deserving of an award.

This has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read. I've read a lot of stories on here but, none of them compare to this on. Bravo. I hope you have several more stories and they are written just like this one. Very detailed. Merry Christmas to you.*cheers*

I'm glad this story was a winner in the 2020 Winter Story Contest. It is very well written and thought out. A great story for stroking and cumming.

I think the judges were terribly mistaken when awarding prizes. This story by far was Best in show. Definitely a page turner, a panty dropper, and a multiple orgasm kind of story. Bravo

Very imaginative well written story. Thank you

Read Xmas eve and Xmas day! Thank you for this story!

Hello PoisonPen,

As the Title of my post states, I really enjoyed Holly's personal gift to Eve. It's wonderful to think that while Eve gets the Evening of her life, her Cheating Ex can't even get his Xmas rocking! Nice touch!

I was looking for the courage to submit my own story for the New Year. Since you wrote in the 2nd Person, I can too!

Wish me luck,

Shelly

An absolutely wonderful tale. Extremely well written. Will definitely be checking out your other offerings.

Terrific tale, I should have read before Christmas

Just a touch overlong, but very enjoyable and very hot. Also, orthodox Christian Christmas is on the same day. It’s Easter that is one week apart usually (but not always)

Loved this one . Actually came back to it for the third or fourth time this morning. Good stuff!

Okay, in spite of the dissembling about Santa not pimping out his elves and turning them into prostitutes, I absolutely LOVED this story! ❤ ♥ 💖 I really liked the experimental toy that let Eve experience how the other half lives. I totally didn't see that one cumming...er...coming. 😆 🤣 😂 lol

5 stars and saved to favorites! It was just as brilliant as it was festive!

Omg loved it😍

This put a smile on my face. Totally not what I thought it would be, but we'll done. Thank you

LOVED it, and..way unexpected...Holly has a full lush muffin, and Eve too...

and hope Eve DID mean it...!

Brilliant & joyful.

I am reading this two days before Christmas. It is a wonderful Christmas story. It was funny, light hearted and didn’t take itself seriously. Holly was perfect as the elf. And as always, Eve needed some convincing. I am glad you provided it. Her ex was a bonus. Yay!. Hope you have a Merry Christmas. You just made mine lighter.

This is hands down one of the absolute best short stories I’ve ever read. It’s also one of the best erotic based stories I’ve read. I don’t normally comment on stories. I’ve only done it once or twice in the years I’ve read Literotica. This is me BEGGING you to continue this amazing literature. Find a reason to bring Holly and Eve together again. A story written this well deserves a god damn series, let alone just a part 2 or 3.