by NewOldGuy77
Thanks for a good story, it far outranked the plethora of sick cuck stories trying to flood this site.
I think Mr. Percy said it all !
Thanks for the read .btw 5*'s
Terrific story. Loved the comments about Manila Girls. My 2nd wife is from Negros Occidental and I couldn't ask for a better partner.
YES its a great story... 5 BIG STARS... I'm glad that their was More of a story behind it... In stead of just all ABOUT sex...
Great story than you only critique I can say is detailing the sex more other than that it was great.
I loved the story and the fact that the MC wasn't made out to be a cuck. However, I could only give it 4 Stars due to the BTB (which a lot of stories at the moment seem to need) part at the end. He has now lost his family as well. A good romance story should have a feelgood factor and this doesn't for me I'm afraid after that part. I know it might be realistic but I come here for a bit of light hearted relief from all the crap going on in the world.
As I have said I did enjoy the story and your other stories so please don't take this as criticism as you are very talented in your storytelling.
Very good read 5 stars. Would of liked more to the ending though, as what happens to his nephew and his sister and mother do they apologise.
Great story! What I don't understand is why Paul's mom and sister would help Tiffany at the end? Yes, there is a Paul Jr. But they did not need to side with Tiffany and tried to get her and Paul back together. Nevertheless, it is a great romantic love story. I truly love it.
To my readers: this was NOT a BTB story. Even though Paul walked away from Tiffany, she still had the support of his sister and mother, plus all the wealth and possessions she took from him in the divorce. She’s hardly burned, just remorseful that she foolishly cheated and threw away a good husband and father to her child.
I loved it, as I am married to a Filipina and living in Floridablanca, Pampanga. A few events in our lives are somewhat the same as your story. The first time in my life, I am exstatically happy. I adopted my wife's three children. Michael
I enjoyed the story with the exception of the treatment of Little Paul. The poor kid needs to be rescued
Wish I could give this story another 5 star rating. This story is unique in its storyline and stands out by its delivery of the plot. I came again to this after reading it few months back.
Good sir, you have an eloquent hand at writing such stories.
Wonderful story! I hope his beautiful wife, Dawn fills their home with babies her husband, the man that truly loves her and his new son, Jacob, and the baby his beautiful wife is carrying. His slut ex-wife would do well not to bother him, because Dawn would scratch her eyes out to protect her husband... 15 stars!
I married a Filipina several years ago and it was the best thing I have ever done. I now have her and a daughter that loves me, and I love them without reservation.
Really nice. A sequel with more info on his family after the showdown would be good
WONDERFUL, 10 stars! Dawn was Paul's wife before it legally happened. After it happened, I'd hate to bother her husband or children, mama bear, though small, would be on the loose! Please write a sequel!
As a parrothead I have to give five stars to any story that starts with Jimmy Buffett lyrics.
This one is a big fat 5 in my book but I not only liked the story but also San Miguel, and the Pinays!
NewOldGuy was handing out candy with this one and I was eating it up ......