All Comments on 'I Want All My Firsts to be With You'

by hubriswhore

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I would love more chapters!

Roy_L_FlushRoy_L_Flushover 1 year ago

Awesome! Very well described.

So much like my first time it hurt.

KachinaDollKachinaDollover 1 year ago

Perfect. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lovely! I appreciate the way the story ends. They haven't had penetrative sex yet, but each has broken through an enormous psychological barrier. They are now intimate partners, if still a pair of virgins.

wjthermanwjthermanover 1 year ago

Great story, just the right pace for the length. Definitely would like to see this continued at the same speed.

ChequamegonChequamegonover 1 year ago

I don't give many 5 stars but your piece was special. I hope you continue it.

SeaReaderSeaReader12 months ago

Really sweet, realistic, and with great tension. More with these two would be welcome. Thanks for sharing this!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

PLEASE.tell us there's a chapter two in the works! I want to follow these two as things and relationships progress

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

truly fantastic. one of the best written pieces on this site

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