All Comments on 'I Want to See Something'

I like how the narrator is not in control of the story. Too often narrators (especially male ones) rule over every detail. This one gets pushed into things (or gets things pushed into him!) as much as he pushes others.

This is a well written, highly believable story. It is also an erotic encounter that many couples would like to experience. My wife first showed the story to me, saying that it had given her some ideas. This seems to be your first story published here. It is an excellent start, and we look forward to hopefully reading more in the future.

OMG, this story is so fucking HOT. This exact sort of scenario is a frequent fantasy - fucking and sucking my girl while sucking cock and drinking cum. I would do this in a minute if the opportunity ever presented itself.

Great story!

This story is awesome and takes me back to younger days and having real horny sex parties with bisexual friends. So much cum eating and pussy and cock sucking. The best horniest fun was had and this story brought back those wonderful memories.

I about came in pants reading this. It reminded me of the time I sucked 4 guys at an adult bookstore. I didn’t have a girl with me, just enjoyed some good bi fun

Great story wish my wife and I could have have this kind of adventure.

Thanks again

Lynn

I absolutely LOVED this story. I've often enjoyed al fresco sex on the beach and in sand dunes. But the detail reminds me very much of the specific details of sharing strangers cocks and cum with one of my ex girlfriends, Suzanne. It makes me think I should write it up and post it it for everyone else to enjoy. Now I'm going back to wanking my rock hard shaved smooth 8" cock, thinking how erotic, naughty, pleasurable and downright fucking fantastic it is watching my gf getting fucked by a few guys, filled with their spunk and then the joy of licking her clean and sucking their cocks. I've LOVED it ever since. Thank you so much for sharing xxx