All Comments on 'I Was a Teenaged Metahuman Ch. 01'

Nice writing and actually believable characters makes for a surprisingly riveting read even without any sex scenes. I hope you keep the series going :D

Really well written and paced. Please keep it up!

I look forward to reading more of your story.

Keep going with this as you very good character development

Fascinating plot, great characters and sexy scenes.

I'm waiting for the next chapter with bated breath

i loved it, awaiting the next chapter

Loved the story. Can't wait for more chapters

Thanks for the kind words, all! I live for that stuff! There are two more chapters of this story coming out in the next couple of weeks and more in the works.

Also, forgot to mention: all persons engaged in sexual activity in this story are at least eighteen years old.

Then oh sweet, dancing jim-bob Jones’s her nipples. Freakin hysterical man loved it keep it coming bra

Some familiar themes, but very well written.

It appears that the hero's powers are developing gradually. I rather like that.

I liked the yard scene when they pull up the vine together and get all mucky and then wet. Entertaining.

I'm enjoying it and looking forward to the 2nd Chapter.

Thank you!

Bobs your uncle. Good story, very fun, oh how I don't miss those teenager angst.

Lots of creativity and not the usual twists and turns. 5 stars from me.

It was almost 4, since you included one of my pet peeves. The story states: "The poor guy's into you and you could care less!" NO NO NO! it should read, "... you couldn't care less."

Awww sorry I missed that one, MormonJack. That one bugs me, as well.

Good story, I missed “ couldn’t” also. Looking forward to the rest in the series.

Very, very well written story so far! The pacing is damn near perfect. The way you write allows the reader to read between the lines so perfectly that I felt I was going right along with you in your thought processes. I'm literally at a loss for words in describing how much I liked this, and how DAMN GOOD your writing is!

@Dark_Raven Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I've been a little anxious about getting back into Teen Meta, but this comment put me over the edge. I really hope the next installment brings my beloved readers as much joy as the previous bits!

Seems all to true. Looking forward to what you chose to have happening in the future. Thank you.

I found this after your latest chapter was posted so I figured best to start at the beginning and I am glad I did. This is an excellent read. Everything is realistic and could have actually happened which is really unusual in this category. I am going to start chapter 2 and I am very excited to have something awesome to read tonight. Thanks for the story and for everything you put into it.

J.D.

I wanted to tell a story about someone with sex powers who lived in the a real world. Everything grew from that. I've worked hard to get there, and it gladdens my heart to see it's noticed. Thank you.

Such vivid characterizations - well done!

The no sex almost put me off, but the promise of mini golf kept me reading. But for real, this is interesting

It's a genuinely charming story the characters are extremely well developed and as a foundation you've done an exceptional job.

Rereading this series as I love it! I noticed in the first paragraph after "Hydra" subheading. You say Valerie's house, but then say her mom came out. That could seem to be Felice's grandmother. Might want to change it to 'Felice's house' or instead of 'her mom' just say she. Minor minor, but popped out in my reread.

Nice story.

DickMarks, write more! I keep coming back to your stories and I need more!

I hear you, friends! I am working on new stories. Thank you for your appreciation. It means so much to me!

I absolutely congratulate any dude tough enough to bypass a non-committal almost GF to take her mother on a date including a shower together on the first date, even if they still had most of their clothes on. So cool!!!

OK. So his mom really brainwashed the MC. Felice is the stereotypical teenager, Valerie is a tease, but I'm curious to find out where this is going. Onwards to chapter 2! Also wondering if our MC is some kind of Prof X slowly getting into his powers, or if he's more like that guy from the Mentalist TV show. Just really, really good at reading people...

The fact that you put "azaleas" as a tag for this story had me laughing for a solid 5 minutes!