All Comments on 'I was Converted into a Sub'

Please get someone to proof read your work. Simple spelling and grammar mistakes make it harder to read. Abbreviated words like 'diff' instead of different is just laziness. And make sure you get details correct, like body measurements are chest-waist-hips, you made those maids have fat waists in comparison to their hips, and you gave blood pressure not heart rate.

Apart from that it's pretty descriptive not entirely to my taste with the vomit and shit but each to their own :p