All Comments on 'I Whispered, "Cheyenne" Ch. 01'

by InTheColdColdNight

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
And at the end of your story, I whispered...

Sweet

Captain MidnightCaptain Midnightabout 7 years ago
Hey, this looks nice!

Hope the romances (will there be several of them?) develop at their own paces and not be rushed. I wonder if this will be long-term or short-term? I'd like to know when more chapters come through.

eshortie103eshortie103about 7 years ago

This was good. I can most definitely relate to Rebecca's obliviousness. I hope you continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Looking forward to the next installment

Great start to the story, but you left us hanging....continue the story please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I liked this and am looking forward to more chapters.

AlohaSheilaAlohaSheilaabout 7 years ago
A nice way to start

A good set up for what promises to be a fun series. I"m looking forward to hearing about Paige, Rachel, the coaches and the other characters introduced so far...this could be lots of fun!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
why

why is this story basically the same as the other one you wrote on 08/22/14

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
"Sapphic"

What is it with straight men and the word sapphic? Literally NO ONE but you all use it. It's stupid and makes it clear you have no real knowledge of lesbians.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
So far, so good

Please continue this story!

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