All Comments on 'I Will Look After You, Papi'

That was a great love story, walking powerfully across the line of taboo love. Well done!

I hope you write more, enjoyed the story, I thought it was well done.

He doesn't deserve her. She should have seen someone else to ease her needs. He should be the one to watch her.

She truly loved her father, an blessed with a child.

I really dug the emotional connection portrayed between them, the staple wheelhouse reason for mom leaving (i also use death/cancer, or alive and accepting/eager for a F/D relationship tween them). The only real criticism i have is in this particular execution of her end result (pregnant) by dad. The story lost most or all of its froward momentum to me with her getting preggers like this. If this is 1st chap of ongoing story, then it sits much better, especially if she gets knocked up 1 or more times the right way (per your seemingly loving, close and deep relationship tween F/D).

Judging from the story... they both are connected by blood. So the feeling of being alone and only having each other shows how deep and intimate they are. By taking the responsibility as a wife, the daughter automatically became attractive to the father. It probably didn't work out with the friend because even the father longed for his daughter. Incest is real and it is one of the most beautiful relationship in the world. It's taboo but it's happening all over the world. If gays can be together then incest family should also be allowed to be with each other. Love the story