All Comments on 'I Won't Stand For It'

JD black label I’ll bet. A man after my own heart. Awesome story.

I like this limme, sory, this Brit, I understand him fully and completely. I would do and say exactly the same things.

Worse than terrible.

Well, old Bob got his nuts thumped but Claire only got booted out of the house, so much for an epic BTB. Without any physical proof of her infidelity it's just his word against hers. The ending was kind of rushed and left us hanging.

Great start, where is the rest?

Anon the bottle is exactly right.

And why did he bother hiding at the driving range if he was going to hit him in the hospital?

I wish the author would write new stories

Why do you authors always have the guy go into the bottle. Always to excess. It's an overused and pointless trope.

What other point I would like to make. One doesn't feel love and heart for the person that trashed him.

What he's feeling lost and loved for is the woman she used to be a woman to be The woman he thought she was. The woman he sees before him now is a doppelganger. She only looks like the person he used to love if you were starting out fresh and new. A woman like this who had never even date her. I like this cold cool calculating way i've exposing And then trashing her. Actually ruthless precise to the point and final.

Great story. I want to read the next chapter soon.

Good start. Mow where's the rest of it?

Good story, well written. I just wish the author wrote more at the end about Claire and how he left her with very little and she never recovered from it for the rest of her life. Of course, that is what I would have written. 5 stars

Well at least he didn't end up with the sister.

Amazing story, I recommend to read it.

What a drunk asshole. I hate cheating too, but I couldn't really see why she loved him or wanted to be with him. Good riddance.

Just another cheating bitch. It would be interesting to see, if divorce laws were made to be fair to both parties, how much that would put a damper on the women who cheat. The more I read these stories, the more I understand why men don’t want to get married!

Ending too short. Did the MC hook up with Sammi after the divorce? Would have liked to have seen some evidence collected for Bob's wife.

Good story but not great.

Rather abrupt ending. Would have liked to have learned what ended up happening to the wife and boyfriend. Did the boyfriend skip town, afraid of more retribution? Did the ex-wife and boyfriend hook up later? What about more retribution on the wife? Aside from being divorced, it didn't seem like much happened to her. And the MC never had any hardcore proof. If the wife decided to challenge the divorce, which I would assume would have adultery named as a reason, there was no physical proof.

Steve said it all, “Fuck off , you cheating bitch!” Old Bob got his arse klcked too. Great story. Unfortunately the old bi/cuck ic69Hunter was offended by the BTB. Bless his wormy little heart.

I read it again and I still like it. I will admit that he left too many clues pointing back to him and I suspect the police will visit him soon, but that's reality and this is fiction where justice is paid out personally.

Good story, very abrupt ending. Thanks for posting!

A real man.

I liked the story. I think he should have started up a relationship with Sammi. That should have been half the story.

I agree with others, needed more follow up to give voice to our assumptions (Bob divorced and renting an apartment, Claire humiliated and on leave for mental fatigue, humiliated to lose her marriage for two lame sessions of infidelity. Steven starts a romance with Sammi to help mellow the heartache... and to burn the ex-wife a little more with her ex-husband hooking up and marrying her sister.

Ending too abrupt. But a good btb. Not usually my type of story but it worked here. He was principled and forthright and she killed his love for her. Full stop. Ironically I believe her that it was mediocre sex because she felt guilty and was drawn in by the illicit thrill, but then again that is one of the most shallow of reasons.

100 big blazing stars for the writer and JD, excellent sipping whiskey from tn. What a great Read, Great Story, Great writing, Great effort and the Cheaters get taken down a notch really hard! I loved it. Great Happy Ending. I really loved the Hospital Visit and the extra punch in the eye! LOL way to go! The throwing the cheating wife out! Buster2U

The least the author could do was to give the MC a good taste in whiskey. JD is fucking rot gut. Pretty much the same story as all the others on Literotica.

Why the JD, Most men I know wouldn't turn to the bottle. Real men keep a sober head. I bet 50% of the men in this country don't have whiskey in their homes.

BTB at its best! Full Marks - 5 Stars!

Thank goodness for JD!

Ham fisted.

Maybe to make this cliched stories more fun, they could be written backwards.

There's never any real BTB in most of these.

They follow the formula because that’s what triggers their readership. Femdom agitprop follows tropes in real life, too.

Liked it, it really needed and ending

Good story but needed an ending 5*****

Not really a BTB, unless one is willing to completely overlook the fact that the only "burn" administered was to the bastard, with the story's bitch being left burn-free.

Also, despite being written as from the POV of the husband, a few spots had a slightly non-male "feel" to the narrative.

Otherwise, this had a good plot, and was a pretty good first try at a BTB.

Story unfinished until he and Sammi get together and mock Claire who will be all alone or stuck with Bobby boi.

I see comments that say the bitch was burnt. No, she wasn’t. The asshole suffered a mild punishment. The slut has not been punished, and the way the story ends, she won’t be.

Getting kicked out of the house and eventually getting divorced is NOT a punishment! Those are bare minimum consequences of adultery. Frankly, I wish the wife had been punished. It would be a better story!

ZK

Disappointing story. Their is what is called a “cheaters checklist”. But there is also always the “cheated on checklist” as well.

*cheated on spouse drinks heavily. Nearly always JD - check

*confronts cheater and monologues like a supervillian - check

*bonfire with all of cheaters possessions - check

*puts cheating partner in hospital - check

*ambushes cheating partners spouse - check

* cheated on spouse prevaricates with “I must think!!” Sometimes for months. - missed that one here

Overall, very disappointing story, and quite predictable as far as content goes, but nicely written nonetheless. 3*

Anyone that's calling the MC a cuck is obviously mentally deficient.

I see a lot of commenters, taking the writer to task, for making the husband a wimp. For those of you who have been married and cheated on, one of the first emotions is disbelief. Surely you are misreading the facts in front of you. A husband is programmed to protect his wife. So making the change from protector, to mortal enemy, sometimes takes a little time. In this case, the stupid slut had been cutting her husband off, which is a sure fire way to arouse his suspicions. However, she wasn’t being mean or demeaning to him. So it took a proverbial slap across the face, to waken him up. once is understood the facts, he acted swiftly and surely. And the bitch, and her boy toy, got burnt. 5 stars.

FTDS!

From one bitch sister to another!! How fucking convenient!!

Another cuck husband with no balls, just crying like a fucking wimp!!

I think the opposite of most in that I like a concise ending. He suspected, he heard his SIL tell him, yhen he acted. What else does the reader need for a story?

Quit

I don't see how you can salvation this story as he deserved more than slap for being a total wimp. So you started story portraying him that way.

Stupidly miss judging the cheating I can deal with But Not trying to wimpy hiding from it

Like many stories throughout Literotica, I tried this twice (for the record both types of BTB are my enjoyment) You can write. There is no doubt about that but there is one line that was rather prophetic here "All the old clichés fall so easily from a cheater's lips," except it should be "from a writers pen". This had most of them that we find in BTB stories. The only thing missing was him and the SIL getting married.

Really its too bad you didnt avoid the LW tropes that everyone just has to include, because, after all, if everyone else is using them they MUST be good.

" I mostly look for justice in some form as it is hard to accept people being able to get away with treating others so poorly. "

No justice for Claire. She walked away without having to face any consequences in this story.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ What there was of the story was very good. But, the ending was so very rushed.

love these intelligent stories about guys who rely on their"JDs" to help them think and make decisions. You write about a guy that can't even express his thoughts as they come but holds them in his head and says the opposite.Very aggravating to a reader. A man says what he thinks,not the opposite. But then again the "JDs" you have him on in this story at all times probably has something to do with it. I really dislike this kind of presentation/writing..1 star for wasting my time....JZK

When the crazed husband goes before the judge for destruction of mutual property and is forced to make immediate restitiution or goes to jail; where Bubba will be happy to share his bunk Judge make him leave the house for her to live until final desposition He'll curse at the Judge and threaten him resulting in 60 days in jail

with a $2000 fine for threatening a judge

BTB's are so fucking cliche.

stry line was good.. but it just feels unfinshied and to short.. but otherwise i liked it alot

It was indicated that she was going to get hers but I didnt see it unless he was talking about a divorce. A cple more paragraphs would've help this story along, otherwise not a bad read even if it was too cliche..

Another story written by a bitch who makes the MC a stupid weak wimp. Steve's head is definitely in his arse!!

Good start, but it's missing the aftermath and recovery. Samm?

I felt like the lead in was a bit too drawn out. I liked much of the story line until he visited Rob in the hospital. I've worked in hospitals for 30+ years. No way you can just walk in and beat a patient.

I did once like my Bud Light beer and my wiskey ALOT. I was also was a heavy smoker. But my first ex wife also liked the drink and smoke. I dropped them both cold turkey for over 4 and half years to try to improve our relationship and our marriage. The longer it went, the worse it got with her, then I found out she wasn't only a serial liar, but also a cheating bitch. She came home from work one day and her eyes bugged out when she walked in the living room and saw me with a lit cigarette in my mouth, and a big frosty mug of Jack and Coke. She asked what it was about, I said IT'S TIME FOR YOU TO EXIT MY FUCKING HOUSE, AND RIGHT NOW! I told her her personal things were in trash bags in the garden shed. She wanted to know why as she walked into the kitchen towards the back door to go see if her things were really in the shed. When she got into the kitchen she screamed, and kept screaming, NO! NO! NO! NO! when she saw my evidence of pictures from an instsamatic camera spread out on the dining table. THEN she had the gall to try to blame ME for HER infidelity, because I was working too much for the money SHE LOVED TO SPEND. Then she started crying and went out the back door towards the shed and I locked her out and yelled through the window I opened to get her shit and pile it in the taxi waiting out front for her to take her to her lover's house. BYE BITCH!

'WILDBILL

I gave you a grade of 3 -Just Average....

Actually I really understand the Husbands PAIN

The Grade of 3 was very generous.

The Authors writing Ability Needs much TLC - that's

called (Tender Loving Care)

The story as written is not going to fly in real life for Mr. Husband.

It might be OKAY to bend the Law somewhat in LW stories

but this Story completely violated it .

The DA wouldn't even breath hard to convict.

You might actually want to finish at least ONE story.

Ok. I loved the story, gave it 5 stars. But there are loose ends. First, the husband would get a visit from the police, once they figured what was going on. Second, going to see the scumbag while he was in the hospital, was a bad decision. If he mentions it to the police, it will again turn him into suspect #1. I am sure he would have been caught on camera, punching him and hitting him in the balls.

Also, this affair had gone on long enough. Why was he waiting for wifey to confess? Why would it have had a difference? If he took her back, she just would have been smarter about it, the second time.

The same thought struck me, as expressed by the previous comment. Why does the cheated on husband always find it necessary to climb into a bottle?! The way this guy was guzzling JD, was disgusting.

Just once I would like to see a well written story where the Mc DID NOT DRINK A DROP OF ANYTHING. No Jd, xy, he, kp or whatever soup you want. I guess that is against the lw code formula.

A well told tale of revenge. TO ANON: 3 months ago... I've been acquainted with JD for over 40 years and have never seen 180 proof. Typo?

I am sure that most LW. stories on literotica are written by two authors. One who is a BTB. expert and one a RAAC ( or a cuck watcher) they are either one or the other. Both sets are nearly all the same. I could name a hundred with similar story line to this. This was so same, same same. I feel my intelligence is being insulted

1. An interesting and lively plot. Little new, but nicely done.

2. Good character development, consistent through the story.

3. This contribution could serve as a prime example of horrendously poor punctuation. I found myself constantly re-reading sentences and paragraphs to understand who or what was the subject or object of each sentence. Run-ons galore! Such errors and the resulting confusion dramatically reduce my reading enjoyment. I am not flattered when an author fails to do a final edit and proofread.

4. Overall, I liked it and hope to see additional contributions from this talented author.

5. Keep 'em comin'.

Why do all these men fall into the bottle? Guy has many, many drinks and he still functions? Why give yourself alcohol poisoning over an unfaithful wife? Stay sober, march ahead and get on with your life.

4 Stars . I trusted my wives friends . That came back to bite me on the ass ..I paid for everything and they all backed her up . Until she ran out of Money

BEST story i have read...

LW and liquor. Great combination.

I agree that technically 99.9% of the husbands in LW may be cucks. But it's the ones who won't tolerate it that I want to read about. Anyone who willingly shares his wife, or the unwilling that let's it go unpunished are the cucks that I hate. The so-called cuckold "lifestyle" is totally abhorrent to me on the same level as incest, fit only for the dark basements of humanity.

It was stupid to hit good Ole Bob in his one good eye in the hospital. Otherwise, nice burn.

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4 ****

Burn the bitch. Only sorry for being caught. A mistake isn't actively lying to keep a fling going on for weeks or more. She wanted her lust well now she gets the consequences.

If you write an epilogue, a good theme would involve the husband being turned into a human torch when someone lite a cigarette too close to him and caused the alcohol fumes to explode violently. I assume JD was genuine 180 proof?

An epilogue was definitely required.

I don't see the cuckold tag. Yes, by the dictionary definition he was a cuckold, but by the dictionary, 99.9% of the husbands in LW are cuckolds, even the one who scorched earth BTB, and I don't believe most readers expect that when they see a cuckold tag.

Nice BTB.... Cannot see the heavy drinking though...When you are destroying the bitch.. you need a clear head to run through the final threads.

Maybe all these LW women are cheating because their husbands have whisky dick? 😂

Good story about another alcoholic cuckold.

Does every male experiencing a cheating wife immediately resort to heavy drinking? Seems like this is the immediate response all over this website. -3-

@ Vulcan in Ohio

You certainly have the majority of idiot's, Greene, Gohmert and even in your home state the pedophile enabler Jim Jordan. I can list many more....

@Helen1899

Jack Daniels has a cult following in England. I've discussed this with a number of my British friends. Thus man drinks Crown Royal reserve and craft ryes.

And lastly for the author, it's refreshing to find a female writer with the fortitude to write a BTB.

Is that the reason his wife went elsewhere?

Good start but needs a finish (Steve hooking up with Sammi), and as someone else as already mentioned the 2nd attack in the hospital not smart and would have got our hero in serious trouble

It had only just got going, finish the dam story

1 star - violence in any form, is just not acceptable.

Writing was fair per British style. But the characters all acted pretty stupidly. In reference to “iameasel’s” dumb line regarding stupidity of southern republicans (they have no monopoly on stupidity; there are plenty of stupid northern democrats as well), An obvious flaw of this story was the idiot cuckold assaulting Mr. Stones in the hospital and telling him he was Claire’s husband. Real brave hitting a man while he’s down, by the way. Of course, in America now, the really “smart”democratic mayors have made it such that criminals don’t get punished, but I suspect in the UK, Steve would be in lockup real soon, and he might have to pay Bob’s hospital bill, a fine, and maybe share a cell with someone less likable than his buddy from the poker game. One star.

Should have popped Bob again, just for fun. Another good story from this up and down author.

Great story. You should have ended it with him and Sammi getting together, getting married and of course having a great life with kids. Clair just gets a lifetime of regret.

Don't know what story the previous commenters read but this guy when he found out took action fairly quickly like within a couple of days to a week. I guess they don't know it takes a few days to get a solicitor, plan the beating of the paramour, move your assets around for safety. Yes he was an unknowing cuck for an indetermanate time but that was soon remedied. As to his being an alcoholic, it seemed more situational than long term. Either way people often drink more when they are dealing with the stress of a pending divorce. Not a willing cuck here and ending it here seems fine to me. Stones got beat and knows more is coming, plus his wife is dumping him. Claire is booted, exposed and her things are ablaise in the back yard with the divorce papers on their way. All tied up in a nice little package, plus the hint that he and Sammi may end up together was a nice touch. 5*

Let's see,! Wimpy cuckold hits drink as doesn't want to face facts! Smacked and forced to face facts! Enraged! But back to drink! Clear head to plan etc hell no!! Next day doing things! But contacting wife of cheater oh not here! More drink so don't have clear head! Back and forth with useless things as going to split anyway! Hospital! Guy has nothing to lose when kicked out. Police and bubba's bitch!! First person police check cheater's spouse!!! Dumbass story!!!!

FTDS

Story struck me as about as dumb as a southern Republican is. Ok, not THAT dumb, the story doesnt need an upside down nametag on it but close.

Great story and a better ending.

Yeah another jd story are there not other drinks that real men drink.

The guy will be dead of cirrhosis of the liver before the divorce is final. Also, what self-respecting Englishman drinks Jack Freakin' Daniels? Damn, man, have some self respect!

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Good story, by the way. The silent treatment at the end is Legendary! 5+++/5!!

Not that it matters in these situations, but the injured party usually has a little more indecision and emotion. I think he made the correct decision. Once you cross the "cheating line" it's all too easy to repeat. I would want to know why though.

when the going gets tough, the tough drink JD

A straight 5 for directness!

LWlurker

Yeah

Well how else do you treat a fucking cunt cheating wife and her fucking asshole lover? Fuck 'em.

I enjoyed it .I liked the way the wounded party finished this sad tale. This is third or fourth that I'read from this author and dispite ( SP ) what the other commentators I 'm giving her 5 stars .

Moral of the Story: "Ouch, that's gonna leave a mark, Claire!"

It was good till the end.then it sucked