All Comments on 'Ian's Adventure Pt. 01'

It started off great but I am disappointed in the ending. I would have liked to have read how things further developed.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

So denial and motivational with amazing details. Stunning plot twist at the end.

To Be Continued ? ?

Does the author have writer's block ? ?

I'm starting to feel like the cat, with a mouth full of cheese,

that sat outside a mouse hole with Baited/Bated Breath.