All Comments on 'Ideal Suburbia Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well... I think you can do better.

Alistaire is much more sympathetic a a hero.

This guy needs some more empathy. And a bit more realism in the story. Living there couple of weeks, and never seen the neighbours..?

The guy is well build amd goid looking, so no need to buy love or sex in a stripclub.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Same old, same old, no story just regurgitated frat boy rubbish. Pretends respect but in reality just treats women as his playthings.

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