All Comments on 'Ideal Suburbia Ch. 06'

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Ddalton over 1 year ago

Need to work in more sex, that is what we are here for! Story lines are okay, but your style already says not plausible so, not plausible, he should have fallen out of the tree and gotten "you need to get better sex" from his neighbor. I'm sure you have something like that in store.

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